Hello, everypony! My name is Faith Everlasting and I hope that you all enjoy my stories!
(This is the first part of my short story series: 4 parts will be made)
Rainbow Dash is about to become a Wonderbolt as many fans of the show MLP: FiM hope she will, however there is a mysterious pony in the audience during her initiation. Somepony who is set on ruining Rainbow's chances of happiness in life. But the strange pony isn't ONLY there to crush Rainbow's dreams, she's also there to crush Rainbow's spirit once and for all!
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PLEASE! I NEED MORE!
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Ahem...sorry for the fangirl
Please do wtite more!
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You said it was end of part one, right? So there will be part two?
3639563 Yes, there will be a part 2 (and a part 3 and 4). Don't worry! The story most DEFINITELY will not end like this!
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I am guessing that there are going to be more SoarinDash soon since you gave hints from the story
P.S. I will be following you....
3643490 Maybe... LOL! (But the next story is about one of my OC's from "How Far Does Loyalty Go?", so Rainbow Dash will not make an appearance... if she ever will make one again. Tee Hee Hee!)
3643551 It's still worth it!
Wait, what?! You are killing Rainbow Dash?!
Don't worry dashie.
Lightning will be taken care of soon enough.
Good story so far!
here is misspelled.
3643682 You'll have to wait and see... I'm working on the third book right now, so maybe she will have a confirmed death or maybe she won't. You'll have to wait... Hee hee hee.
3647353 I can't wait to find out!
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Oooh, I know! Twilight followed Rainbow, and she's going to swoop in at the last second and catch her, leaving Lightning to fall to her death!!!
Right?
3745490 Possibly... or maybe not... (I will give you a hint, though, no one saves Rainbow Dash from the fall... except for somepony that NO ONE would expect...) Hee hee hee
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NEW IDEA!!!!! But I won't tell. I wanna see if I'm right! 
This was actually good
I can't wait to see what happens next.
nice
I've decided to cancel this series. Why? Because I tried to see where I could head with the story lines of the next books, but failed dramatically.
SPOILERS:
Rainbow Dash ISN'T dead.
Spitfire ISN'T dead.
How?
...
I don't really know myself.
not gonna cry not gonna CRY
3931338 Don't cancel it just set the series on hold
-1 for first person PoV.
It's Omega Flight all over again, Differently Able's class.
Nevermind. I like the shifting first person. Although it lends a pulpy feel that doesn't quite fit.
4987995 -1 for having Trixie in your profile.
Lightning Dust was always my favorite pony. It breaks my heart to know that she has to be the antagonist in a story that presumably has a happy ending.
This is your chance, Lightning Dust! Go on, remind her that they were trespassers who nopony would have known were there! Make her see her actions for what they really are!
7242619 -1 for passing judgement on an opinion comment from nearly two years ago. I stand by it. It could have been handled better 3rd person PoV.