• Published 13th Dec 2013
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Heartless - brony laughsatme



this pony has a horible life filled with death misery and bullying.

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Comments ( 20 )

whens the next chapter to this and pup kind and hated

Please write next chapter quick I lovin the series but it not updated fast enough and you get follow like favorite and 20 mouchstaches
here are the mouchstaches
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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sorry mate, but the next chapter is coming to me slowly. I have no idea what to write for the next chapter. though I am always open to ideas from my readers

3969224 she should wake up in bed in a room across from vinyl and Octavia doin it and walk in on them without them noticicing so they finish and she speaks up then they get embarressd

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well im not to sure Ember would be one to watch :rainbowlaugh:

3976282 well then maybe she should clear her thought when she walks in and they notice and then have threesome
:raritywink::raritywink::raritywink::raritywink::pinkiegasp::twilightblush::facehoof:

3976282 and you should read fallout equestria the original it is in crystals favorites



P.s. I found you through crystalhero97 fallout equestria in his favs

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Dude?! what is it with you wanting my oc's clopped lol... well you may get your wish in this story :twilightblush:

3982670 ok I sorry if you got offended but it all that popped into my mind so um if you no like that maybe she wake up in hospital in ponyville and thunder lane is weeping and the he sees she is a wake and gives her a concussion :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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you know if you want to help write you can always ask :derpytongue2: oh and it is nigh impossible to offend me. *spoiler* there will be clop.... might not e the best but there will be that sort of thing in it :pinkiehappy:

3983338 thanks for the offer on helping but I rally not good and writing so yeah but I can give suggestions and proofread for you if you like

Comment posted by Apple jacks lover deleted Feb 26th, 2014

3995796 no that's ok, :twilightblush: but i'm always open to ideas :pinkiehappy:

Can I help write I realized I can write just fine on a computer
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Of course :pinkiehappy: you can PM me if you like :derpytongue2:

How I pm you tho:applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure::applejackunsure:and what I say or do I pm you what I write

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pm = private message :pinkiehappy: and its to discuss what story you want to write with me

4036967

go to my profile page and click the envelope by my name

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