He didn't want to do it. He was happy with his current form, but knew he had no choice. The faulting power of the Immortality Gate was burning within him. It was a miracle he was able to hold it off so he could say goodbye to his companions. But now he was ascending into space in his TARDIS, while the song was playing. He did a cycle around to make sure everything was in order.
Vale, Vale, Vale, Vale, Vale, Vale, Vale, Vale.
The Doctor breathed heavily as tears fell from his eyes, remembering everything he did in this form.
"I don't wanna go."
He breathed even more heavily, as the tears freely fell. But they turned to gold energy as his regeneration started to show. He looked down at his hands to see them spilling more energy. He tried fighting it more but it was no use, so he let it go.
His body erupted into energy as the regeneration began. The TARDIS got damaged due to him holding it in, everything was on fire and damaged. But eventually, a new face took place.
"Aaaaaaahh!"
His expression was blank as he took in his surroundings, of everything exploding and on fire.
"Legs! I've still got legs!"
He kissed them. "Good."
He patted his body, making sure he had the required parts. "Arms, hands! Ooh, fingers. Lots of fingers."
He then checked his head. "Ears, great. Eyes, two, nose."
He frowned at that and shrugged. "Meh, had worse. Chin. Hmmmm, not bad. Hair."
He patted his hair and his expression turned to shock. "I'm a girl!"
He checked to make sure his Adams Apple was there. "Phew, thank god, I'm not a girl."
He sighed as he looked at the hair. "Seriously? Still not ginger? Just once!"
"Okay, now there was something I was doing. Something important, it was..... it was...."
He was then thrown away by a tremor. In the TARDIS mainframe there was a beeping. He the went to inspect it over the rubble.
"Crashing? No, a dimensional crack. But I thought I sealed them all."
He tried to steer away but the TARDIS was damaged and out of control.
He then grinned. "Well, if you can't beat them, join them!"
He then started laughing like crazy as more explosions happened as he gripped the mainframe.
"GERONIMO!"
The TARDIS got sweeped through the crack and sealed behind him. As he was going through it, his body started glowing. Suddenly, his skin started turning yellow but his hair remained the same. Snowy White.
Another explosion sounded and a tremor knocked him out the TARDIS. Luckily, he managed to grab the box before he tumbled to his death. But the TARDIS was still out of control. Taking out his Sonic Screwdriver and putting it in his mouth, he attempted to climb back into the blue box. Hearing some ringing he looked behind him to see a school and he was heading straight for it.
"Oh, that's no good." He mumbled with the Screwdriver in his mouth.
He used the Screwdriver to activate the control, making the TARDIS fly high but he almost fell out again. He eventually managed to climb back in and closed the doors.
"Oh god, that was too close for comfort."
Yet another explosion occured throwing him away.
In Canterlot City
"You okay Twily?"
Twilight Sparkle was looking out the window when her brother caught her attention.
"I'm fine, Shining Armour." She said. "Just worried about something."
Shining Armour sat beside her. "The crack in your wall?"
Twilight looked down. Noone in her family could figure out the crack that appeared in her bedroom wall six months ago. It baffled the joiners as well. Twilight clasped her hands together.
Shining Armour chuckled. "What are you doing?"
"Praying."
He then stood up. "Well, I'm gonna check on Cadance. You just carry on."
Twilight closed her eyes and thought. "Dear God. I really don't know if you exist, but at ths point I've run out of options."
"There's been a crack in my wall for quite some time now. But what my family don't know is that I've been hearing stuff from it, I'm scared. If you really exist then please, PLEASE send help. I don't care if it's an angel at this point or even a policeman. Just anything."
Twilight frowned when she heard what sounded like wheezing and groaning and then a crash made her fall on the floor.
"What was that?"
She looked out the window and was shocked to see a huge box in her back yard. It was smoking but then she saw something written on it.
POLICE PUBLIC CALL BOX
The purple skinned girl blinked. "Either this is a huge coincidence or God exists."
She quickly ran downstairs and bumped into her mom. Twilight Velvet.
"What was that?" Velvet asked.
She didn't get her answer as Twilight ran outside to the box. Her dad, Night Light called out to her.
"Twilight! Come back, it could be dangerous!"
She didn't listen, this box could be the answers she needs. She stared at it, amazed by how this box even got here. Twilight then heard a voice behind her and turned around to see Velvet, Night Light, Shining Armour and his girlfriend Cadance.
"Woah." Cadance breathed.
They then stepped back as the doors opened, they gave a cry of surprise when a grappling hook grappled to a rock. Something was coming out.
"Be careful, whatever is in there could be dangerous." Night Light warned them.
Twilight hid behind her brother as a pair of hands gripped the outside of the box. It then revealed to be...
....a teenage boy?
The five people gawked at the boy. He couldn't look any more older than Twilight, he was wearing what looked like a light
blue button up shirt and a tie as well as black trousers. He was also soaking wet.
"Can I have an apple?" The stranger asked. "It's all I can think about. Apples. I love apples!"
Night Light just blinked. What was wrong with this Kid?
He grinned. "I must be having a craving, that's new. Never had cravings before."
He then looked down and low-whistled. "Woah, that's a big drop."
Velvet frowned. "Are you okay? Do you need help?"
The stranger shook his head. "Nah, just had a tumble into the library. Hell of a climb back up."
Cadance frowned. "You're soaking wet."
"Fell in the swimming pool."
"But you just said you were in the library."
"Yeah, so's the swimming pool."
Twilight walked from her brother to ask. "Are you by any chance.... a policeman?"
"Why?" The stranger leaned closer. "Did you call a policeman?"
"Did you come about the crack in my wall?"
The stranger frowned. "What crack? Argh!"
He collapsed to the ground in pain, Twilight gasped. "Oh, my god. Are you okay?"
The stranger raised a hand. "I'm fine, this is all perfectly norm-"
He stopped and coughed up a bit of energy.
"Who are you?" Twilight whispered.
The stranger looked at his hands which started glowing. "I don't know yet, I'm still cooking."
"Does it scare you?"
Twilight shook her head. "Not as much as weird."
"No, I mean the crack in your wall. Does it scare you?"
Night Light looked at her daughter. "Twilight?"
She looked down and nodded.
Everyone jumped when the stranger jumped up. "Well, no time to lose. I'm the Doctor. Do everything I tell you all, don't ask stupid questions aaand don't wander off."
The doctor walked away only to crash into a tree. Twilight gasped and the others ran up to him. "Are you okay?"
"I'm fine. Steering's a bit off."
Twilight looked at the blue box. "Could he really help me with the crack in my wall?"
hmm...
Needs a little work, but other than that very good!
I don't think anyone else has done this before so...Keep up the good work!
3579120 thats why i need pointers, more on the doctor who part itself
Not bad I look forward to reading more.
3579125You're doing great so far. If you need pointers, go on Youtube and look up Doctor Who so you can study his...well everything. Like how he speaks, saves the world, battles aliens, and making funny jokes without trying.
Overall I wish you the best of luck.
3579174 right, well.... best get started
should i also make a day of the doctor story too?
3579196Considering I have not seen that episode yet, I'm still punching myself for not seeing it on day one
I'd say finish this one first before you go off on the rest of the adventure.
Its your story write it like you want to see it!
3579233 i mean like a side story
3579233 i missed a HUGE chunk of doctor who episodes and i hate myself for it
3579273Oh...Well in that case, go for it!
"Onwards and upwards!"
3579339 actually, this doctor will say 'Avante!'
3579346Why not Gerronimo?
3579346Or Allons-y for that matter?
3579358 trying something different
3579383Alright then. Carry on.
3579196 If you think you should. Though that would involve the Doctor returning to his base universe. Just think it over if you think you should.
3579903 well, I have something planned. Besides, this doctor is gonna be attatched to this universe
3579915 Alrighty then, I can't wait. I have a feeling that this story may be fantastic.
3579925 I'll start on day of the doctor soon, there will be a return of a familiar pony doctor and a certain pegasus/human
It could be interesting, but you know, do you have to use almost the exact same lines? I mean you could just make them a little different. I mean this is a My Little Pony and Doctor Who Crossover. Make it unique. Just a suggestion.
You still get a Happy Pinkie Pie though!
3579960 youll see. Im gonna try and do different lines but i still want it to be sorta the same
3579943 Fantastic, absolutely fantastic.
3580029 however, after this episode, i dunno what to do next. maybe i can do the movie
3580040 Which movie? There are a few. The cannon 1996 movie starring the 8th, and the non-canon Dalek movies.
3580045 equestria girls
3580049 Ohhhh, huh, well if you think it'd be a good idea. I dunno.
3580055 and then maybe sunset can tag along, heck shes already something you wouldnt expect her to be in quest for the apple
3580074 That would be interesting, and original. All up to you. Also, are there Daleks in the Equestria Girls Universe? It'd be interesting to see whether or not the Dalkes (if there are native EQG Universe Daleks) would know who the Doctor is. Just throwing that out there.
I saw the list of 'Vale's, then had to go listen to Vale Decem.
Dropping it here for anyone that wants it.
You're short 2 'Vale's.
This is a great story I hope you add the doctor's speech to the atraxi just like from episode 1.
what happen next chapter?
Man oh MAN does this have potential! You can bet your Sonic Screwdriver I'll be following along!
3579273Are you just talking about New Who, or are you including Classic, too? Anyway, commence read.
Post-read edit: Awesome story so far! Now for the minor grammar Nazi-ing and Whovian nitpicking:
should be could.
The tense is wrong.
NO ONE. Not "Noone."
Capitalise "The Doctor." Always. Capitalise. THE DOCTOR.
There were a few other awkward sentences and such, but otherwise it was a pleasant read. I'm probably going to hate myself for offering this, and I won't be able to do it frequently (thank you, Engineering major!) but if you would like a prereader/editor to catch these sort of things, I could help with that.
Current score: 7.3/10. Well-done, but there's a bit of awkwardness in sentence structure. Much of the dialogue was also copied pretty closely from The Eleventh Hour. I still enjoyed it, and am looking forward to the next chapter.
3581821 thats so weird, my english teacher gives me the same grief about my tense, never notice it until it's pointed out.
but thank you for showing the corrections for me
but i dont understand the first part of your comment
3582601There are two "eras" of Doctor Who: the Classic era (Hartnell-McGann) from 1963 to 1996, and the New era (Eccleston-present) starting in 2005. If you're talking about all of Doctor Who when you say that you've missed a lot of episodes, then you're certainly correct because there are 97 that are lost/missing, the First Doctor had 134 episodes, the Second Doctor had 119 episodes, the Third Doctor for 128 episodes, the Fourth Doctor had 178 episodes, the Fifth Doctor had a 9-minute movie plus 68 regular episodes, the Sixth Doctor had 31 episodes, the Seventh Doctor had 42 episodes, and the Eighth Doctor had a 1996 movie.
So yeah, there's a lot of episodes. Once "The Time of the Doctor" airs this Christmas, there will be 800 of them.
3582785 in that case, its modern for me
ITS AWSOME
Twilight Sparkle is Amy Pond. Your argument is invalid.
HA! The Eleventh Hour, favorite Matt Smith episode! Twilight as Amy Pond, hmm, I could see that happening, but I figured Twilight would be more like Donna Noble.
You should've made God in that world some kinda Faust or Hasbro anagram like Stauf or Shobra. I mean come on. Even Amy was just praying to Santa.