• Member Since 13th Nov, 2013
  • offline last seen Feb 10th, 2015

JohnHoly


I will not be doing much guys, but I might upload some stories.

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Phew. Found a safer place to write. I'm at the harmonized base. It all happened 10 years ago. It started with the downfall of the holders of the Elements of Harmony. Barely anybody knows how they became... corrupted, but some ponies believe it's linked to the Elements of Harmony stones.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

If you say I should write longer stories and fix up all errors, try making a story on a phone.

Do you have a computer? You need one.

Mooved too fast, didnt explain verry much, felt like a chapter (hell, two) were missing, and don't abbreviate the names. I dont care if they did in the tv show.

I liked how you crossovered Rainbow Factory, Cupcakes, and Under A Spell. Cool stuff.

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Writing something on a phone is a terrible idea. It is also no excuse.
Tip, a functioning computer is a wonderful thing. Get one, heck, get Microsoft Office as well while you're at it. Until you have a full size keyboard, you're wasting your time just because of how inefficient phone writing is.

Comment posted by JohnHoly deleted Jan 16th, 2014

3558447 My dad is gonna reset the computer instead. Tip: NEVER DOWNLOAD A FREE GAME! You know the story "The Past is Faster Than Progress?" I'm saying TRUE DAT! Anyways, it'll be a while, alright? I start out with summaries that end up being true chapters. Later, mates!
P.S. I'm still in middle school. Trying to make a story that I can look back on and know that this is the 1st story I truly told to an audience.

Comment posted by JohnHoly deleted Jan 16th, 2014

Hey guys! The updates will come in small bursts whenever I am able to use the computer, aight?

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I will be doing my best to fix all errors when they are pointed out to me, k? HELP ME GRAMMAR NAZIS! :unsuresweetie:
Anyways, I agree with you 100%. My 1st draft: stupid summary. Final draft: I can't believe this was a summary and a crappy story!

3558447 Read it again and tell me what you think of it. Don't dislike a story cuz of where it was written.

Comment posted by Lord Solaris Pentecost deleted Jan 16th, 2014

3558447 A phone is a computer.... you must mean a PC. A computer: PC, XBOX, 3DS, DS, PS3, PS4, PS2, PS, (get the msg?)

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