Rainbow Dash is a young pegasus who dreams of becoming a member of the Wonderbolts, the best flyers in all of the magical land of Equestria. However, on her birthday all of her overtraining takes a toll on her health. When she is diagnosed with a disease that will likely take her life, what will she do?
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It was okay for a first attempt. Your spacing is a little weird and you start a new paragraph even though it's the same sentence. And remember, one paragraph per speaker. Start a new one when the speaker changes. Don't forget to capitalize. Besides that, you're pretty much set.
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I know!!!!!
for the life of me....i cant figure out how to space it right....
i've been doing this fore like....what 4 hours :p
thanks though
WoW i dont have have the words to describe this but i think pinkie can
maybe rarity too 
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You're welcome.
More.
I need more.
I don't know why but I'm interested in this.
Moarrr</3
I dont get it the thing on the front looks like the end of cupcakes and pinkie has one more party with dash before she leaves forever and pinkies demon takes over
