Flying High is the story of a young pony who is sent to a "Naming Ceremony" to discover what his name will be.
But something seems off, somehow- a Naming Ceremony? Perhaps not all is as it seems...
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I can help you too! Hopefully I look like someone who knows a thing or two. We can trade feedbacks! I got things to do now but ill be back.
Okay, first off, I really liked the creativity.
The whole ordeal with the trails was a little weird to me, but the ending made it all work out. I sat there reading it thinking, "Where the heck is this character?" "Is he even in Equestria?" Now, I want you to understand. That's not a bad thing. I actually think that's a good thing, because it kept me interested. It kept me wanting to know more and that kept me reading.
The trails were a bit cheesy. The lava and the bravery ones were I think the weakest of the trails. The one with the different kites I thought was very interesting. It showed how knowledgeable he was with kites and knowing that efficiency is ultimately going to win out over anything else. I thought that was pretty cool. I just wished the other trials were as cool. Something that was still as creative as the first trial.
The end made me laugh a little bit, but at the same time I was going "What?" The way the classroom reacted was not how I would have pictured it. I thought that a least a few would have enjoyed it or at least been respectful. I mean, the odd looks aren't a problem, but just the fact that nopony was even being respectful or even pretending, I thought that was really odd.
Really good creativity. A few spots here and there that I saw could have used another proofreader as far as spelling. The space was a little difficult for me, a little more space in-between sentences would be nice, but other than that, a good solid story. A lot of creativity and imagination. I liked it. So, I hope to see more from you in the future. Take care.