This story is a sequel to the Fimfic Gutterloo by jmj in a Ace combat story inspired by a comment on the story of Gutterloo.
Scootaloo even after Rainbow Dash took her in is still depressed after losing so much in her life, she lost her friends, and the trust of ponies around her. Somtimes the little filly couldn't take the pain anymore and just wish her life was over. But in her future she will become the first Shadowbolt captain and give rise to the New Lunar Republic.
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Its good so far can't wait to see more!
I liked how you are doing a follow-up to Gutterloo (excepting Scoots dying at the end, and her being adopted by Dash). I am also intrigued by Luna appearing to Scoots and giving her a proposition to become a Shadowbolt. I remember the Shadowbolts (aka Nightmare Moon) trying to get Dash to desert her friends in "The Elements of Harmony, Part 2". So, I am most interested in seeing how Luna turns the (so far) flightless Scootaloo into a Shadowbolt and where she goes with it.
I would also like to see if Scootaloo can mend fences with the Cakes, not to mention Apple Jack and Rarity (so Scoots can hang out with Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle again). I just want to see Scoots happy.
It's pretty good right now, but it seems a little fast paced.
OMG! That was not cool of Cherilee to kick Scoots out of school! I wonder what Dash will say when she hears about that. But at least Scoots wouldn't have to deal with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon every day.
But it wasn't all bad for Scoots in this chapter, she is getting along real well with Dash and she meets Rumble who could actually be a friend. Hopefully, Rumble's brother will be cool with Scoots. I can't wait to see what Rumble's invention is.
I hope that Dash will be able to help Scoots smooth things over with Cherilee, not to mention Apple Bloom and Rarity. Update soon.
This is good, I can't wait to see more of this.
Come on please right soon, I want to see what Rumble's invention is
More please.
please update so far its good