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Applejack tries to sleep but she can't. Trying to ease her mind, she starts to think of her parents but it leads to more problems.
Dark tag is there for a reason.
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Dark'n'Dirty.
Gotta love it.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Dayum.
This is some dark shit, yo.
And I gotta say, nicely done at that.
Well damn
I'm tellin' ya, I'm already three quarters the way through this and I just don't see the need for the Dark ta-OOOOOOOOHHHHHHTHERE we go!
Meh. Bit silly, but well constructed. Nice subversion of the usual trope, but... eh, iunno. The guilt of doing your daughter would be good way to push someone over the edge.
Hmm, I doubt THAT will ever become canon. (Unless MLP moves to Adult Swim). Thank you for not making it spoogy. Good work. Keep it up.
Bow-chicka-wow-wow?
Bow-chicka-wow-wow!
No bow-chicka-wow-wow.
You are a silly pony, Applejack.
This was a sweet story, something I am not used to seeing from you, TittySparkles. If I were not a withered up husk of emotionless flotsam, I may have been moved. It was still good, though.
Poor Apple Family
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooookay...
I'd say Tragic would be more fitting a tag, well maybe Dark and Tragic. I didn't care for it, but it was worth the read. As always good work, I have read most of your stuff so I thought hey why not.
Derp! :)
Dear God, I thought this was just a fic about applejack's parents and her missing them.
I was very VERY wrong.
But I must confess, this was well written.
Please don't misinterpret this, but I honestly didn't think you could write anything but straight clopfics and still be awesome at it. I should be ashamed of my naive thinking.
Awesome work!
Yeah, it's dark for a reason, no doubt about it. Great, but a little creepy.
3523017 Technically, most of her clop fictions are not... "straight."
3522889 That's what I thought too lol
Uh, it was set up nicely, but the story idea was a bit far-fetched.
Why is it dark? .......oh...god....
Not a straight up clopfic like we are use to seeing but the "matureness" is still there
poor fucked up AppleJack
The incest jokes make it seem true now
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3522889 That feeling you get when you skim through a story and miss all the wrong parts, then see the comments and realize you didn't just read what you thought you just read.
Seriously, remove a few parts and this could be a great story. But I just can't get behind this as it is...
+1 necrophilia tag
Not bad, really.
Applejack didn't really speak like Applejack, but I wouldn't go so far as to say she was out of character.
Really, this could make a lovely full fledged, mature fic with actual backstory and plot that would set it apart from so many of its cloppy brethren.
I hope to see you develop it, Titty.
All I could think was "Oh my Celestia..."
Woah, that's...Deep and dark. I actually thought rape was gonna happen, but...for whatever reason it seems so much worse, considering the circumstances...