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Beauty only skin deep

It has been a year since Twilight has became a princess and to celebrate she invites her friends to canterlot. This put's stress on one unicorn

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Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #1 · Nov 24th, 2013 · · ·

You wrote quiet as quite through most of it, there were some other misspellings and a few of your sentences need some grammatical corrections. Other than that I think that this is a good story. This also seems finished but you have it listed as incomplete, just thought you should know.

Comment posted by Firekitty8 deleted Nov 24th, 2013

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