nice ending my only question where was diamond tiara during all of this

3702392 she was being daddys slut

3702899 ok

3702392 I couldn't add her.

Sequel?

3818047 Maybe.

3912732 Kinda the point. Pip and Rumble can't get drunk, so they need to be drugged. And read chapter two, you'll get why.

You should change the cover image before it gets reported for being NSFW.

3913261 Isn't it supposed to be like that because it's a clopfic?

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The rules on this site state that no matter what there is no nsfw pics on the site. Just wanted to warn you so you don't get in trouble.

3913343 Thanks. Don't want any trouble on my hands.

3913239 It's everbody if they're anthros.

Great story but to me it wasnt a clopfic it was an enticing story with a great plot line. 4/5 spikes

Okay, you get a like.

But it was a extremly rushed. Now if it was slowed down much more it would be worth a fav.

Meh, overall, okay, very short, and gets the fuck my horrible life award from the person who hates his life.

4926767 It's still meant it to be anthro. I just kept saying humanized

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Uhh… me too …

Oh silver did'nt go to the bar again for that reason she was turned to a mare that is always horny and locked in a cage by me

So where to begin?

First: Pacing much? no really the story went as fast as a speed run in Sonic Generation in Green hill act 1

Second: Calling Sliver Spoon a slut when all she was doing was getting Spike attention was uncalled for.

Third: Sliver Spoon plan felt, weird and dumb at the same time. Ok why would she want to rape Pip and Rumble when she's after Spike? It would make more sense if Sliver Spoon, drug Apple Bloom as well as giving her something to make her horny as fuck, and have at least one teen to record the act then sent it to Spike.

Forth: Where in the hell was Diamond Tiara? If her dad owns the teen bar then I know for sure he'll make his daughter the manger.

Sorry if I came a bit harsh but those are the errors of the story I can't get over.

You get a like.

But.

Two out of five Spikes