The Black Virginian country boy, but now living in town.......still, enough said, lol 
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Sweetie Belle has feelings for Spike, knowing his crush on her sister Rarity. But when Rarity is wrongfully taken away, will Sweetie find the courage to admit her feelings and save her sister from life imprisonment?
This is my first fic. I don't know how often it will be updated, since I get writer's block easily, I just wanted to have this out of my head. Take it as you will.
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It's on like dinner bon!
DAMN, I need a new chapter
NEW CHAPTER PELASE
Very interesting so far.
Possibly a well thought out set-up...
But who would do such a thing?
Well... only one way to find out...
ONWARDS AND UPWARDS!!! (Celestia damn me, I love to say that!)
This has a lot of potential. If you have more of it written but aren't sure how well it will be received, go ahead and post! This is a fanfiction website, we are all here to improve.
You've created an interesting dilemma for the characters. Will Rarity's status as an Element of Harmony put her "above the law"? Will Celestia step in? Can Sweetie Belle exonerate her sister, or will Rarity's name be forever tarnished? How will Sweetie deal with her feelings for Spike with her sister under suspicion?
Only you can provide us with those answers!
So, good sir, if you're up to the challenge, let's have them!
I need a new chapter very baaaaaadly. It's so good, and has me wondering what will happen next. Please continue sir!!!!
Well...shit, that's just happened. I'd be laughing if I said I did not at least chuckle but damn, this is crazy, not even Rainbow Dash knows this huh? I can't wait to see how this goes on, amazing job so far. Spike can maybe talk with his mom but not sure how Celestia would take even her own son's word...shit.
Well, this is certainly a very original concept! I like where this is heading, please continue!
Also, just a tip. You should give it some more tags so that it can fit it into more groups. You should really get this fanfic out there. I know a lot of people who would kill to read this story.
This has a good premise and your writing style is very good. Plus, there are no grammar mistakes that I remember. Now tell me, why haven't you continued this terrific start?