At the request of her sister and a community of scientists, Princess Luna is asked to investigte the odd happenings at a sceintific research facility in Tall Tale. What she finds is a long standing mystery invloving it's missing director, and a conspiracy involving her family and staff. As a result, Luna gets involved with the family drama, secrets, and skull-duggery of those invloved in order to thwart an act of revenge decades in the making.
Maybe if you fixed the multiple typos in your description the story wouldn't be taking as much of a kicking and you'd net in more views per chapter? Or maybe a picture? First impressions are important, I think.
I've been meaning to fix that. I thought something might have been off, thanks for letting me know.
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At the request of her sister and a community of scientists, Princess Luna is asked to investigate the odd happenings at a scientific research facility in Tall Tale. What she finds is a long standing mystery involving its missing director and a conspiracy involving her family and staff. As a result, Luna gets involved with the family drama, secrets, and skulduggery of those involved in order to thwart an act of revenge decades in the making.
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Ah good, I was very close then. Thank you for your help.