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TwiDance??
Yup, gonna read this.
Edit: Read it. Super hot!
Good job. 
Looks real raunchy.
I'm going in head first!
What? Twilight cheating on Rainbow Dash? No! Or, maybe, yes?
Whoa. This is something else. Nice.
Does this count as princest? Because only princest is wincest... and this winning and kinda incesty.
I really liked this story bro you should do more of these using the other princesses can't wait for whatever amazing story you have planned next. I can now go to bed happy
3476606 Thanks, glad you liked it!
3476735 Lol, the funny thing is, I already have a Luna x Celestia clopfic in the works!
There should b a comma between "vigor" and "at."
She is your SISTER! Oh, yes, and you are dating Rainbow Dash. You could have at least invited her. I am sure Cadence would not have minded. She seems pretty open-minded, she is married to your brother and she is having... ...fun with you.
Oh, you lying strumpet.
Well...
*cue heavenly choir*
Wow, Twilight, for a "virgin" you sure know how to talk dirty.
Good, Twilight, do not think of her as your sister... or your brother's wife.
So, apparently this is not set in the same universe as "There is a First Time for Everything."
There should be a comma between "readily" and "though," you also need a comma between "docilely" and "accepted." The comma after "before" should, instead, be after "her."
Ah, the wonders of magic.
There should be a comma between "later" and "she."
Let, let the servants clean that up.
There should be a comma between "activities" and "but," because now it is activities butt.
Giggity.
I think Twilight said it best:
Indeed. Great story, have a Twilight ahegao, you deserve it.
3477206 Heh, thanks for that!
its <> it's
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That was fucking beautiful.
I thoroughly enjoyed this
New Fetish Unlocked; Internal Female Ejaculation!
That was... not bad at all. Nice job on just leaping headfirst into the clop, it so rarely works, but you pulled it off.
Hot.
3478166 Heh, thanks!
3477727>>3477591>>3476700
I'm glad to hear that you guys liked it!
Now, what to write next, what to write next...
Yes, please.
Yep. I knew it before it came out. This is so awesome.
TwiDance? I was also planning to write a fic with that shipping.
Will read later for... research.
3478788 Hint, hint.
Well, having not read the story in which this was based, I find this to be quite well-written. I presume that the story is along the same lines in respect to quality, thus good. So, have one of each of the following:
And have a second 
Excellent job!!!
OMG. I seriously thought no one else thought of this. I'm so glad I'm not the only one, I read that and instantly screamed in my head, "I WANT IT@#!
" But alas, technology hasn't gotten that far yet. :c You clever author, you. You've read my mind's secret desires for a sex toy. 
Now do me a favor and mass-produce it!
This needs a sequel.
Or better yet;
Shining stood by the door, jaw on the floor, ayes the size of service plates and a massive throbbing soldier between his legs.
As he awkwardly moves away from the bedroom he starts muttering to himself "don't worry soldier first thing next morning thy will wake up to us doing a pincer maneuver, thy will not know hat hit them! That will teach them on cutting ME out of 'fun times'!"
In the morning fun times happen.
3488385 Yes, while that would be funny, I'm not going to write a sequel to this. This was just supposed to be something small, and I have no intention of furthering this.
However, I am currently working on a Shining x Cadence bondage clopfic right now.
3493287 Who's going to be the bitch and who's going to be the boss? I hope Cadence is the Mistress and Shining is the bitch!!!
3499668 It's exactly that. Shining fucked up good this time, and now he has to make up for it.
3499680Yahoo hoo!!!!! Awesome!!!
3499680 What did he do? Did he made something with Chrysalis? Perhaps he had a little "adventure" with her?
3499700 Ohhhh, trust me, it will be... I'm already at 3k words now, and it should end up at least double that, maybe more! I don't think I need to say this, but Shining is going to have his boundaries pushed to the max, and if you want, I can show you the pic that inspired the story; just send me a pm.
3499708 It has nothing to do with Chrysalis lol. It takes place in the crystal empire, and wait, why am I telling you this?
3499728 Aww. Too bad. Oh well. I'm positive it will be one hell of a good story. As for why you're telling me this... Well, only you can understand your own mind, pal.
3499728 Also, rather than the "Derp" icon, I would have used this one:
ermagerd, thers ers serm really gerd perny pern
3512826 Thanks lol. If you want good clop, go check out my other stories. Those are a lot better than this!
I for one love when a story starts at an intense moment, in not talking about like starting in bed, but when a writer can start something and give enough detail into which the reader can piece together whats going on, very well done
dash out
3518008 Heh, thanks!
3512828 Best one you got is the longest, "There's a First Time for Everything" haven't even finished it yet. Like a lot of things on this site
stupid procrastination
3532184 Heh, I'm not procrastinating at all! I've been busy at work on my other stories!
3532196 at least one of us is
3532220 What's stopping you from writing?
3532251 Me, that's what, not today, NOT TODAY
. By the way, LOVE YOUR STORIES
3532277 Lol thanks!
3532382 and dat sexy twilight pic
Well I did want to see the sex scene that got skipped over at the end Just a Kiss and now I have and it was glorious.
Yeah, so, uh, this was the first clop story I ever read There was one I read here before, but it was an Equestria Girls story, so I don't really count it. I figured I'd start here because I really liked the other story that connects to it. A bit of a landmark for me, so I feel like I should say something.
Looking back on it with a bit more reading experience, I gotta say that this was a solid story. As solid as a story that has virtually nothing but sex as its content can be, anyway (does that count as gonzo?). The dialog was decent, I heartily approve of the particular ship, and the descriptions were just about right to be informative without being distracting. I'm not really into clop, but I say this is good.
3544282 Thanks bud! Yeah, this story was just a scene from Just a Kiss by Mayhem Darkshadow. People kept asking him to write a clop scene, but he said he didn't want to. I volunteered, and this is the result.
Anyways, if you want a better story, check out my Shining x Cadence genderswap clopfic, Oh, The Things we do for Love
3544307
Gender... swap? I saw that go by, but I dunno, I'm a little scared.
However, as a man of science, I know that I cannot judge something I have not seen properly. This attitude got me into this fandom, it's the reason I'm exploring clop when I used to run away from it screaming "I'm not a clopper," and I swear this attitude will get me killed one day.
Yeah, I'll give it a read.
3544454 it really is great, if you haven't read it yet, I can't wait for the next chapter.