It was just a normal day. Rainbow Dash clearing the air, Applejack bucking apples, and Pinkie Pie holding some parties. Twilight thought it would be a good idea to practice her teleportation spells, because why not? After Rainbow Dash interrupts her, the spell goes wild, and she just disappears.
She soon awakens in a strange forest, much too different from the Everfree Forest. Then, stuff goes down.
This is a retelling of Pokémon X and Y, but with Twilight Sparkle.
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Man, here's a tip: Excessive self-deprecation does not actually make you funny, or make me want to read your story.
It just makes me think "why read something the author has no faith in?"
i have an awesome lucario on my team named power I LOVE him
Dude, Riolu is a cool pokemon, don't beat yourself up over it.
Great story so far lol
Tiens, pourquoi tous les noms de chapitre sont en Français?
3771403 Because the Kalos region is inspired by Paris, and France in general. They even say a lot of French phrases in the game.
At least you admit it is cheesy, that's a good thing.
Sigh the problem with this is
You need a recap
3778347 what
3778449 it's been a while many people will have forgotten the plot and don't want to reread so put a
Last time on ______
I think you ment "unlike"
You obviously referenced a song from the beginning of the MLP Season 3 Finale. That and you put "at" instead of "and".
i really like this story hope to read more soon
Short Story and kinda Generic so far, but its your first time. If you want help learning how to write, find some proofreaers or the writer's group, they should help you out
Is this Calem wanting praise, or Twilight not being allowed to talk to Fennekin?