The clock strikes midnight on the fair city of Trotingham. Shadows of the tall buildings in sight of anyone who are up tonight. However, deep within the city lies evil of the unknown. As a werewolf awakens deep beneath Trotingham, as the clouds go past the moon he awakens . . . His first victim a little colt which goes by Pipsqueak.
(Part of a set of stories at the least two).
The Monster: A werewolf from beneath Trotingham awakens under the orders of Seth the Human overlord of all evil.
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My critique can best be summed up by the phrase: "Please, for the love of Celestia, get an editor."
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Also, the dream bits are pointless to the story and the ending feels way too "what a tweest!"