• Member Since 14th Mar, 2012
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Maniac92


Amateur writer, professional slacker.

Comments ( 49 )

Here's a like and fav.

ok the story is good but your alternate ending should have been your only ending. It's so much better.:twilightsmile:

Thanks for sourcing my artwork. :twilightsmile: And I really like the story, it made my week with the amount of awesome put into it.

Comment posted by SuchAFoal deleted Nov 6th, 2013

The alternate ending absolultely killed me. I just burst out laughing. :rainbowlaugh:

I like the alternate ending soooo much better.:rainbowlaugh:

I feel like this should have a comedy tag because it's fracking hilarious.

3451396 I can't believe I forgot to put the Comedy tag on there. :facehoof:

Max

THIS IS WHAT I CALL A SEXY CLOPFIC :heart::raritystarry:

u know this clopfic reminds me of a part in hitting those high notes when sweetie belle goes through almost t same thing except she's talkin on t phone - hilariousy sexy:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Then they heard the door open again and Sweetie yell, "Make sure you and Spike clean up after you're done fucking each other." The door slammed shut again.

Lol

It's like your trying to get me to laugh out loud in the middle of class.
Till Next Time Peace.

Oh my god, both endings are hilarious and this was fan-fucking-tastic! Most excellent! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

It's not the best but its not the worst, but still absolutely fucking amazing.
:raritywink: btw. Loved the alt. ending.

Tried to look the name up on tumblr. No results. Anything else?

alternate ending was definitely better! :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by Maniac92 deleted Nov 14th, 2013

3485386 I've updated the description to include the (hopefully) correct address.

Alt. ending was great in its way

alternate ending me likey

I like your profile pic :ajsmug:

3560523 Right back at ya :twilightsmile:

Den oua den, would clop.

3562049 I like that alternate ending.

3764921 I didn't know which ending to go with, so I decided to put both of them in.

3766312 well i loved it. :scootangel:

3766312 why did sweetie's line from the alt ending remind me of Dana...?

3773691 I'm gonna guess from your username and avatar that you mean Dana Mercer from Prototype. If that's the case, then I don't know why. Sweetie only has a slightly neurotic older sister, not a massively psychotic older brother.

3774140 ha!
But no, Dana Phillips from my school days

3774140 then again...
They are similar...

3775806 Maybe she IS Dana Phillips!
:unsuresweetie:
...or not.

3778586 I was not expecting that to be as funny as it was.

:heart:
Don't no what else to say :derpytongue2:

Alternate Ending:

“Ok!” said Sweetie happily. “I’ll see you there!” There was a slam as the front door was shut.

Rarity and Spike breathed out a sigh of relief.

Then they heard the door open again and Sweetie yell, "Make sure you and Spike clean up after you're done fucking each other." The door slammed shut again.

This. This should totally have been the main ending.

That alternate ending. That should have been the main ending.

Pfff :rainbowlaugh: who knew Sweetie Belle was so nosy!

The alternate ending really cracks me up!

I must admit that the other end I found myself laughing more. I was picturing them getting caught anyway.

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