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ok the story is good but your alternate ending should have been your only ending. It's so much better.
Thanks for sourcing my artwork. And I really like the story, it made my week with the amount of awesome put into it.
The alternate ending absolultely killed me. I just burst out laughing.
I like the alternate ending soooo much better.
I feel like this should have a comedy tag because it's fracking hilarious.
3451396 I can't believe I forgot to put the Comedy tag on there.
THIS IS WHAT I CALL A SEXY CLOPFIC
u know this clopfic reminds me of a part in hitting those high notes when sweetie belle goes through almost t same thing except she's talkin on t phone - hilariousy sexy
Then they heard the door open again and Sweetie yell, "Make sure you and Spike clean up after you're done fucking each other." The door slammed shut again.
Lol
It's like your trying to get me to laugh out loud in the middle of class.
Till Next Time Peace.
Oh my god, both endings are hilarious and this was fan-fucking-tastic! Most excellent!
It's not the best but its not the worst, but still absolutely fucking amazing.
btw. Loved the alt. ending.
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Tried to look the name up on tumblr. No results. Anything else?
alternate ending was definitely better!
3485386sorry misclick
3485386 I've updated the description to include the (hopefully) correct address.
3486405 Thanks.
Alt. ending was great in its way
alternate ending me likey
I like your profile pic
3560523 Right back at ya
Den oua den, would clop.
3562049 I like that alternate ending.
3764921 I didn't know which ending to go with, so I decided to put both of them in.
3766312 well i loved it.
3766312 why did sweetie's line from the alt ending remind me of Dana...?
3773691 I'm gonna guess from your username and avatar that you mean Dana Mercer from Prototype. If that's the case, then I don't know why. Sweetie only has a slightly neurotic older sister, not a massively psychotic older brother.
3774140 ha!
But no, Dana Phillips from my school days
3774140 then again...
They are similar...
3775806 Maybe she IS Dana Phillips!
...or not.
3776821 read this
3778586 I was not expecting that to be as funny as it was.
3779679 -me neither...
Don't no what else to say
Dat alternate ending
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This. This should totally have been the main ending.
That alternate ending. That should have been the main ending.
Pfff who knew Sweetie Belle was so nosy!
The alternate ending really cracks me up!
I must admit that the other end I found myself laughing more. I was picturing them getting caught anyway.