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...how nice, two thumbs down within 10 mins since the story went live. We have some true fast readers around here...
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I'll be honest; I skimmed it, but I didn't downvote.
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Most fics involving rape of any kind will get downvoted pretty harshly based on just that concept alone. A lot of people around here get real uppity about that sort of thing.
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The more downvotes a raepfic it has, the better it is.
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inb4 "I know ppl who would find this very offensive!"
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It could also be the roundabout swipe at every other rapefic on the site that attracted the downvotes.
I can see some people not liking this, (in fact I remember a discussion I had with a friend once how two people could RP rape and it wouldn't technically be 'rape,' due to it being consensual RP and he either misinterpreted it or thought I meant legit rape)
But my why boner was totes worth it.
This is an interesting trollfic.
Downvoting rapefics is routine. Your description made read and ultimately do the inverse.
Proper good job, guvnuh!
This is beautiful.
Pffff all of those downvotes and it's not even what they think it is. Silly people.
That was great.
Read the whole thing.
A legit "enjoyed rape" scenario is impossible in my mind, therefore I do not blame you for failing. But fail you did.
My two bits: find something else to write about.
Your creativity and writing skills are fine, t'was only the absurd concept that ruined this story for me.
This was not what I was expecting at all, well done! I hope you do more like this, it was brilliant! Also, where did you find the cover image? And the image you linked in the authors notes says I can't view it as well, do I need an account?
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The cover was commissioned from WilkolakNerevar. I replaced the link to the image in author's notes with an alternative on Tumblr, reload and you should be able to reach it now.
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Well, for true Celestia that was just what she desired from moment one, and hinted at it whenever she could. It wasn't that she somehow began enjoying it, she desired it from moment one! You could only be mad at anon for genuinely raping Constance - but keep in mind that she could have left at any time. Can't really condemn the rapist if the victim is too stubborn to just stand up and walk away! I don't really see what's so hard to accept here...
Well, this turned out much better than the image and name might imply. It was the descriptions and comments that drew me into trying to read this, and I have to say I don't regret it :)
:D
3465764 I read it, but I downvoted on this chapter.
The concept was...interesting. But I honestly cannot decide whether or not to vindicate the guy or not, and am probably going to have an aneurysm figuring it out- thumbs up in the meantime though for the attempt though
You sick man!! You've gone and made me a sick woman!
No seriously this was good! As stories go this was great, clop I played it out in my head a few times, such clop. Anywho I demand a sequal!
Sorry, would this raepfic you are referring to be My Little Slave?
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Not really. Any of dozens of rapefics.
MLS suffered from bad planning. The author really struggled to explain away things he didn't foresee as needing explanation earlier on, and in the end got entangled in own improvisations beyond recovery. (not to mention half-year hiatus breaks.) You could easily apply Tragedy tag to what was supposedly consensual BDSM fic. It was too poorly written to really have an impact on me.
What I could give as a representative example of what I meant is Not Now, Big Brother. It's excellently written, it's borderline rape (although well inside the border) - not a violent rape where things are clear-cut, but something between a brother and a sister, brother too insistent, sister not insistent enough... it really did have a heavy impact on me, spoiled twicest pics for a long time, and generally left with a terrible aftertaste.
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Bad in a good "That was horrifying" way or in a bad "I shouldn't have read that" way?
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Bad as in "too lazy to plan a coherent whole in one go, let's try to fill all the gaping plot holes later". Give the antagonist godly powers and then explain their source as Celestia? Have Celestia suffer a heavy stroke of dumb, making her go along with the half-assed plans of a sex underground gang without ever checking their impact on the society?
That's why I never release a story for which I still haven't at least sketched the ending.
Unless you mean my aftertaste...
No, I come to Ponies for a respite from this ugly world, not to torture myself more. If I want to feel more pissed off, I have dozens of real-world news sites for that.
Odd story, but not the oddest I've seen.
Too short, that's my only complaint.
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Advertise a story as clopfic, make it over 25k words and nobody will read it...
I have to admit I'm not much one for rape fics -unless the guy or girl deserves it- but this one was one I will gladly mention to people to read if they are interested!!!
i think it was a good store like a few others I think its to short I would love to see more on what happens to both of them and let what thay started be finshed. plus I just love human on pony stores not euff of them.
5 hearts on me for a really good store and hopeful more to come.
I liked that. That twist was certainly unexpected, too -- I just thought she was uptight...
your description has hooked my interest , indeed i don't like those aspects about rapey stuff or rape fics at all , so i'll definitely have to take a look at this one later when my com stops freezing from me having to many tabs open of stories i want to read later........
wait what....
What?! No one is being a sanctimonious asshole in the comments? Not possible! Come on people, you can do worse! Pinkiepony it up!
You know, I wasn't really expecting you to deliver on the warm fuzzies promised in the description, but I'm happy to be proven wrong. Have a 'stache.
A rapefic with little rape? This is..unnatural... But it feels so...GOOD.
This was amazing!
This was really nice. I did skim some stuff here and there but you did a great job with Celestia. Thumb up!
WOAH
Am I dreaming???
YAY!
Is this a rapefic I actually don't feel guilty reading?
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You should. It's still pony erotica.
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I see whatcha did there.
ok need more
AHem, you sir are a dick for LEAVING THAT FUCKING CUTTOF !!!!!!!!!!!!!MMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Heh, I'd totally love a story about anon traveling Equestria and solving all kinds of problems through means of friendship and >rape but unfortunately, my inspiration only can get so far before I run out of ideas...
3464701 Often the way. I posted a story yesterday, and within a minute there was a thumbs down attributed to it.
That aside, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was well-written, and the plot was surprisingly solid for a clop fic, let alone for a rape fic. I hope you write some more based in this universe.
Thanks for writing.
This story got me thinking about 'What would I do in that situation', and ultimately I decided 'I wouldn't have written that I wanted to rape Celestia into 4chan, so it's all moot.', but still, any story that gets me devoting more than a moment's thought is something I really enjoy.
However, the 'Anon' protagonist doesn't share my urge to think hard about his situation. He's portrayed as being completely indifferent to his plight, rising to the level of some sort of suicidal mental disease. He's fetishisticly self-sacrificing, and he doesn't have one scrap of emotion or one insightful thought to contribute to his heroic choice. He just does it like some sort of sanctimoniously moralizing robot. That's not interesting to me. It would have been easy to address too. He could have at least been a little scared. He could have thought about the liklihood that he might die, and what that means. Does he believe in an afterlife? Is he prepared for the end? What is he leaving behind by sacrificing himself for somepony he doesn't even know? He could doubt his decision after making it, he could even change his mind. He could think about why it's worth dying for, and none of these thoughts or feelings or cold sweats or trembles or whimpers or clenched fists or chattering teeth would have needed to change the plot. These details could have been added without having to rework any of the actual events of the plot.
Also when Celestia refused the hug, I was pretty amazed. I thought that a realistic, relatable emotion had entered the story. Of course she's not going to want to be hugged by a near-stranger; not the day after she got raped in the mouth. Nobody would want to be touched after that kind of experience. In fact, he was sociopathically rude for even requesting the hug.
But then, sadly, it turned out that, no, it isn't an example of relatable emotions. She's just grossed out by hands.
She goes on to voluntarily kiss a man immediately after being raped. This represents a pretty fundamental misunderstanding by the author about what rape is. That kind of juvenile portrayal is pretty common among rape fanfiction, which is for better or for worse. Honestly, a serious, mature treatment of the issue of rape is a completely different animal than this, and it's the sort of thing that can be uncomfortable to read, or to write. So I don't expect all stories to be that way. Sometimes this type of story is fine. Sometimes perverts just want to fap to a childish surface representation of a rape scene, and then call it a day, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with that in my books :p
Truly, that one is a forgivable sin. Celestia was a flatly written sex object, but at least she wasn't outright boring and confusing, like the Anon.
The concept/situation saves the story for me. It's really interesting. It's a moral conundrum: Rape somepony innocent, or violence will be done to you. It's an interesting one, and a possible wellspring of interesting emotions and conflicts could spring up out of that, but the story adds another twist to the concept: Everyone in that room was the kind of person who cavalierly said on an internet forum that they would love to be a rapist. ! That brings up so much more room for internal conflict. What about the people in that room who didn't actually mean what they said? I bet they're regretting saying it. That sort of thing could ruin a person with guilt (if they go through with it because they're fearful for their safety) And there's even more juicy depth to be plumbed: Celestia knows that she's being raped under threat. She could have an internal struggle whether to condemn and hate her attackers, or to forgive them... that kind of thing could rip her up inside, and provoke some very interesting arguments, especially considering her status as a benevolent loving leader. But instead, that avenue got a really shallow treatment. Luna busts out street justice and starts summary executions, and Celestia does nothing more than waggle a forehoof, tell her she's naughty, and then forget about it forever.
Decent stuff, though. I think I might end up reading the other two chapters just to see where it goes from here.
Lol I love this so far let me check the rest
Lol the game is afoot lets see how he does : p
>Despite the [Human] tag, this is a pony-on-pony clopfic.
.....wait what? whywhat?....
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You'd be more among anons, you'd see this is not really uncommon. The life tends to turn into such a dreary, that tackling a chance to make a difference - any difference, at any price - becomes a goal all by itself. If you look around, some of the school massacres were started by anons. It's that league. If you can't relate... feel lucky.
In my headcanon, Celestia is made from tougher material than that. To withstand what she withstood one needs a truly incredibly powerful psyche (not to mention in this story's canon her psyche has been 'reinforced'). No mere cock in mouth can break her, or even significantly hurt. Meanwhile, phobias reach deeper than that. These really could hurt her.
Still, the obligation to reward the hero for a heroic deed is very important to her. She'd even be willing to suppress her phobia.
Rape is, when you boil it down, insertion of certain organs into certain orifices. There's nothing inherently harmful in that. What is harmful, is everything that surrounds it; fear, humiliation, helplessness, hate, pain, all that can create a lot of very deep damage, but all of that happens only in the victim's psyche. If that psyche is strong enough, the only result will be some lingering anger. In this case Luna takes it worse than Celestia herself!
First, Luna *is* equal with Celestia. They don't agree on everything but Celestia won't stop Luna if Luna is bound on something. She did disapprove, but what was she to do, throw a fit about it? Banish Luna? And then, Luna is impulsive. She was really scared, and personally would probably gladly obliterate all who might have potentially meant a harm for her sister. The fact she left two thirds alive is the best compromise they worked out together - judging them by their actions. These reluctant or gentle, acting under duress, were spared. These, who tackled the opportunity - died. These, who resisted, were set free.
And as for "street justice", this is attempted assault on royalty, in a setting where royalty is not merely a tourist attraction. Look up punishments in these cases - e.g. medieval laws concerning that. A painless death in sleep is exceptionally merciful.
Damn man I've always had head cannon that something like "Constance" happened to celestia. Awesome read well written designed and executed
>No, wait. Ctrl-shift-T
first sentence to a rape clop fic and i learn something new! go figure....
>f5
holy crap this fic is just a treasure trove of keyboard shortcuts isn't it?....
>list of sites
>list of my sites
lol darn you.....
"After twenty-seven times there won't be much left to save for you."
....as if the previous lines weren't funny enough.....
"Twenty-six. When he starts she'll be after twenty-six times," sounded somewhere from the back. After a second of silence, the voice added "Sorry, I have OCD."
HO-LY FUCK DID I LOL......
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"I'm dreaming, that's fairly obvious."
"So we're all in a dream?"
"Only I am."
......OH GOD DANMIT , THIS IS ALL JUST TOO FUNNY HOLY FUCK......
"How is she? You had your hands on her."
"Plush. Fluffy."
"Smells like vanilla?"
"No, pretty much scentless."
"Drat. There goes my headcanon." He chuckled."
welp , i guess im not gonna get to clop to this tonight to due all the spontaneous laughter that keeps emitting from me as im reading this :/ .....
"My grin couldn't have gotten any bigger.
Well, Celestia didn't smell like vanilla. Luna did smell like cinnamon though."
D: ? m-my princess of the night doesn't smell like a gentle cool night's breeze , but freaking cinnamon???....