After the Elements defeat yet another enemy, Princess Celestia gets fed up at their insubordination.
Author's Notes: Collaboration with my good friend, Flint Sparks. The idea for the story was his.
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I shall summarize my reaction to this story using the words of David Tennant's Doctor...
What?
What?
What?!
What?
What?!
And that is all. The like is incoming.
Da buck did I just read?
Oh my, what an um...wonderful fic, I loved it
This is so terribly awesome.
Huh. Wierd. Enjoyable, but wierd. However, putting on the facade that everything was normal before Celestia's freakout would have made it more interesting. We all knew it would result in something ridiculous, but the lack up buildup (even for a 1200 word story) weakens it somewhat. Make the foe seem at least slightly threatening and keep jokes to a minimum so there's buildup to the insanity that makes it more satisfying.
Wow...
Wonderful! I am hammering the like button as hard as I can!
This is strange. Very strange.
So I begin reading, and not 4 lines in I'm already hooked, going LOLWTF quite enthusiasticaly.
This is going to be good.
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*Finishes reading*
Well, not as sensical as I was hoping, but still amusing. Decent read, even if it may have been more random than I find to my liking. A good day sir.
Well then....... This just happened......
Wat,
A.) Lost it here
B.)Like and Fave without even needing to read the rest.
Postread reaction:
Lawl, wtf?
Aka Season starters in a nutshell
3418264 Yeah...this was a little...forced. It was funny, but I felt like there were too many jokes that were pressed too far into our faces.
Ehhh, not bad, but not all that great either.
But it did have Twilestia
If you live in a town with barely five dudes without going interspecies, you're kinda stuck with lesbian. Of course that's great news for the few guys who are interested.
3418264 is it in a LESBIAN PONY SEX way?
Totally pointless, totally dumb, totally irreverent, totally nasty, yet totally AWESOME.
3418704
I suppose it could be in a LESBIAN PONY SEX kinda way...
3418542
It was fast paced and more than a little forced. I didn't downvote it though, it is Twilestia.
Also, I've had days where I am too old for any shit from anybody, so I can empathize with Celestia. Sorta. It just takes a lot to get to that point and a few extra tidbits about the crappy month she's having and this could have been comedy gold.
3418862 Indeed it could have been.
I....I....I....?
Umm...
I don't..
Sponsor plug?
Keanu Reeves?
Princess's royal harem?
I have no words... just... have a moustache
Weird.
uhh... weird.
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I can't tell whether this is entirely stupid or if this is a brilliant (if breathlessly angry) critique of a lot of the stuff you find on this site. Regardless of intention, it certainly feels like the latter. ?/5. Would recommend to somebody with nothing much else to do.
What were you guys ON when you wrote this??
and why aren't you sharing??!
daily dose of random has been received.
I umm...ah...uh...eh...alright?
Whelp, not like I needed this anyway.
*Throws away his brain*
WE GIVE IT 65 WAT'S.
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3420451 How about, one-point-twenty-one gigaWat's?
3420593
WE APPROVE!
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3420075
This.
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No. Do not want.i.chzbgr.com/maxW500/874543360/hA92C905C/
...Can I buy some pot from you?
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Only if'n ya share!
What.
What is this and why did I finish the chapter?
3420672
LOL'd.
Uh huh.
Well, this story clearly took a left turn at 4th and Bananas...
Well, it lived up to the comedy tag so I guess I can't complain. The jokes were well spread although there were a few places where it dropped off a bit, but narration I guess?
So meta, so funny!
Loved it! 
...I would've loved to see this continued.
The WTF train has no brakes.
It only stops once you smash it into pieces whit your WTH. :3
I hate you so much! you and everypony else that took the time to read this.
3441604 hey weren't you the one who wrote all those ridiculously short clopfics?
Ah, the joys of Applejack being the voice of reason.
For homosexuality!