Voices

Twist has schizophrenia. She's convinced she's fine.

The voices in her mind say otherwise.

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My name is Peppermint Twist, and I'm not crazy. · 25th Oct 2013 · 1,140 words
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The light in my darkness · 25th Oct 2013 · 206 words
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Soft Shell

Soft Shell #1 · Oct 25th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

Dont worry twist your not crazy.
Everyone else is.
Isnt that right fred?
*Stares at his buddy fred the muffin*
Wow fred you sure are smart
Whats that?
*"fred" the muffin just sits there*
Of course i wont let that mean grey pegasus eat you.

The Vicious Cannibal

The Vicious Cannibal #2 · Oct 25th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

This fic... it's a nice way of expressing schizophrenia. A certain way, definately different from mine, I don't see silver, and they don't nessesarily convince me to try to kill myself, but other than that, yeah, that's pretty much it.

Drizzle Quill

Drizzle Quill #3 · Oct 25th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

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I really don't know all that much about schizophrenia other than what I've been told and what I've read online, so I'm happy to know that this interpretation somewhat succeeded!

And this was supposed to be a much more severe case explaining the voices telling Twist she's worthless; also, the silver represented the tears that Twist was shedding every day.

However, I'm glad you enjoyed.

The Vicious Cannibal

The Vicious Cannibal #4 · Oct 25th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

3395903 Yeah, I guess you did a really good job with this.

Danger Noodle

Danger Noodle #5 · Oct 26th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

This was interesting. Good job.

2D #6 · Oct 27th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

I personally have very severe schizophrenia, but it's not much like this. Then again everybody suffers differently, for example whereas Twist is duped into attempted suicide by her others, I merely am forced to whisper whatever they speak - like an impulse, I can't stop myself.

Interesting concept however, especially considering I'll be writing for a character like this soon. Nice job.

Blagdaross

Blagdaross #7 · Oct 28th, 2013 · 3 · · My name is Peppermint Twist, and I'm not crazy. ·

This is criminally underappreciated.

Azusa

Azusa #8 · Oct 28th, 2013 · · · The light in my darkness ·

Could probably use more polish.

Keep writing.

Slendermare

Slendermare #9 · May 25th, 2014 · · · My name is Peppermint Twist, and I'm not crazy. ·

A bit short, but I liked it. Well done.

ServingSpoon

ServingSpoon #10 · May 9th, 2016 · · · The light in my darkness ·

3408976 I disagree. seeing as the story is told from Twist's POV in her head with no external dialogue I think it's written just perfect.:rarity wink:

Daddy?
I think that white is my favorite color.

I wouldn't be surprised if she didn't paint the red stripes on her candy canes anymore. poor Twist. Much love for this filly and the new spin you took on her personality.

what a !