Deep in the Everfree Forest, a brilliant golden light is shining through the darkness of the beautiful night and in its warm glow lay a being not from this world. After a moment the light dissipated and this being began to move. Not knowing what happened, he lifts up his head from the cold earth below and opens his eyes and thoughts of panic begin to rush into his head...
This is my very first fanfic and in all honesty have close to no idea what I'm doing...this should be fun...
So please read, review, and most of all criticize
Chapters (13)
Tracking just to see where this happens to go.
tracked, will rate once more chapters come out.
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Will be, in fact writing it up right now
CanIhaveMoarOhKayThanksSeeYouLaterBye.
NiceFicByTheWay.
Fic seems to be going nicely. Hope this doesn't turn into another human-turns-into-pony fanfic. I just think its more interesting how a human tries to adapt to a life in such a setting. That is just my opinion, tho.
Also, sent u a PM, Flame to answer your poll.
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Trust me, human-turns-into-pony has never and will never cross my mind when making this fic. Also you might be happy to know that the original idea I was thinking about this fic was for him to adapt in Equestria, but most likely not how you might be thinking
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Hey, originality is also interesting, heh. Looking forward to the next chapter(s)
I could've sworn it was mentioned somewhere that his name was steven something or other.
Also...
was only in one episode it was hard getting his personalty down
>personalty
>wat
There were more errors in there, but I was too busy reading to copypasta them all into another document for the end.
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Thanks for the info dude, after a fast google search of Steven I found this
Quote from Gryropedia:
"Steven Magnet's name derives from the Youtube Transcribe Audio feature. This feature attempts to put the video's words as a subtitle, but often fails hilariously. On a scene with the sea serpant, the subtitle reads "Steven Magnet" even though he says nothing remotely close to the words. "
And now I'll just edit it in
Also the personalty thing, honestly when I misspell a word I just pick the first thing that looks right and not look at the others...bad habit I know and has just been fixed
" "You see...I've been lost in this forest since...last night...and I have no idea witch way to...get out of here." "
- mother fucking homonyms
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fixed...and thanks
Aaaaawwwww Angle is so acute!
Angle? Who is Angle? Like a 90 degree angle?
It's Angel...
Are you trying to say "oh" instead of "ow"?
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Yes, yes I was
and now its fixed.
Does anyone see what I did there? Angle, acute. Angel cute... aw nevermind!
"but that part with the hates was kind of...scarey."
........ Hates? you mean hats?
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oops missed that in editing, thanks for the heads up
Oh dear. Well that sucks.
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And believe me, it only gets worse from here.
Sadness sucks. Still I have the feeling that you will continue the sadness.
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Yes sadly I will
but it will all end a good note... kind of
Don't even try to write and post a sad ending . By the way i think that the Discord will cause quite few problems.
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Don't worry, if anything it will be a bittersweet ending, and the epilogue will be a happy one.
im fairly certain charging money for movies is copy right infringement
I'm still reading. And still getting sad. I ask you when will it get better for him? If it gets better that is...
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it will get better by the end of the next chapter but remember what I said higher up, if anything it will be bittersweet and the epilogue will be a happy one. So just stick with it because honestly...this story's almost wrapped up
319087 Already?! Man you work fast. I better see a sequel!
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Where do you think celestia gets her molestia nickname? Once the pony police find out the laws your breaking, celestia will break ur ass like a black thugged out gangster when you drop the soap in pony prison.
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lol great, I'll be looking forward for that
Good work on chapter 10, now where is chapter 11... START WORKING ON IT I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! MAKE IT REALLY REALLY DRAMATIC AND PLAYED OUT!!!!!
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Halfway done writing it out right now, but you still need to wait for tomorrow for it though
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tommorow my ass, get to writing it now and release it ten minutes before now.
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Sorry, but that's how I roll
besides it needs to get edited and don't you want it to be the best it can be?
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addicts don't wait.... and I'm having a craving for moar...
Oooh. I am interested to see how this will end.
The quality of this story is so low I can't work up the effort to care about it anymore...
Prediction time! Discord escaped early because humans are naturally chaotic creatures, thus speeding up the process.
You best be making a sequel. Season two has barrely started. Actually, technically it didn't start because they never went to the gala and so season 1 didn't end.
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There will be a sequel but not what your thinking at all.
326918 ....... now that youve said that, im guessing its gonna be a ponies on earth fic.
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You'll see... but chances are you won't think of it in all honesty
Its outside the box
I am interested in reading your sequel.
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Thank you old Chap
Perfect ending
Clap clap clap bravo bravo!