Hi I'm a Brony from Asia! Nice to meet you all! Also Twilight is the best pony!
Twilight Sparkle, A bearer of the element of magic, had a very powerful magic since she was young. However that powerful magic actually drained her life and there was no cure for it. The only way to prevent herself from dying. She had to be put to sleep. While her time is running out, how will she tell her friends? Will she leave something behind for them?
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here's hoping you find yourself a good proofreader.
Other than the glaring grammar and punctuation mistakes, good story. will continue reading for the plot.
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I know I'm not good with grammar because I'm Asian and English is not my strong suit, but I'll try to write a lot because I want to improve my English and writing skill. 
Thank you for your time.
its really good, sad as well. if needed i could possibly help with your story, unfortunately the most i can do is fix some obvious mistakes, my grammars not thats good as wells
Nice beginning to a story.
Only problem is that the grammar is kinda terrible :(
The spelling is actually quite good.
Well, I guess the new chapter alert lied
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New part should be up soon!
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I press the wrong button.
Sorry about that!
Hope you enjoy the new chapter!
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Well, that was certainly an emotional chapter
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Ah sorry I was going to publish only a little of it because the later part was still in editing!
You probably read it to the end right? It's fine, but I will delete it first.
(Why I'm I always mess up in things!)
I will publish the rest this weekend and the new chapter maybe or maybe not finish next week due to the new season.
So see ya!
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Looks like I got a sneak peak then. Yay
Great chapter, but it would help if you got a proofreader since there are a few errors in the story.
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I have been working on Proofreading and editing, this chapter hasn't been fully edited and will be fixed soon.
Rainbow.
4262198 Haha, I wish I could write Rainbow's part right now because I have planned everything for her, but that mare has to be the last on the show or else it won't be fun.
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Aww... What about Fluttershy?
4272348 I think I can manage that.
Is there going to be more
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Yep, there's going to be more...
but I won't make a full out promise that I can't keep anymore.
I've tried rewriting a first few chapters but it didn't turn out so well... maybe because I have lost the motivation on it since, well, quitting the university.
At least, to say for sure, I'm not giving up on writing and my life just yet.
We'll see how long it would take before I can set myself in the right path again...
PS. Thanks for still reading my story. I appreciate it.
Please don't give up on this!! I personally think this is an awesome story, and if you keep going, this could make the Feature List.
Please update soon.
I've read this story on fanfiction and on this site, and I really want to read more.
By the way I'm a Twidash fan too.
6704604 Oh boy, an update huh? I'm currently rewriting the story. I might take awhile. Not to mention the Final exam in college too. Don't worry though. I won't abandon this one. I really like it. Thank you for your support. I'll try to get it back up as soon as possible.
6705263 Glad to hear(see) that. Good luck.
6705263 By the way you know you don't have to rewrite it. I think it has a perfect beginning. I love it.
6705587 Well, one thing I can tell you for sure is there will be a change. I want to cover the plot holes that some readers notified me. To be honest, the story didn't exactly have a drastic change, but instead focus on the writing style. I was learning how to use English when I started this fic. I could say that I'm a bit better than before. So, I just want to see how much I progress during these years.
Also, I guess you'll have to wait a little bit longer because the final exam is in a week and I have to prepare myself. I also completed rewriting the first chapter. All I have to do before published the edited one is to write an interlude and Chapter 5 along the way. So, yeah, stay tuned.
6707928 That's cool.A good story's worth waiting for.Good luck on the exam.
6707928 Any progress? Pretty pretty please?
Damn. A dive into the old trackers and I find this gem of a story. I’ve never been one for sad stories but this... this was an exception. It’s heartwarming yet bittersweet. This would have shaped up to be a masterpiece had you continued it in my opinion. It’s already called the waterworks and not much has happened. Awh. Life catches up with all of us I suppose. I’ll hold out the hope that this will magically continue but for what its worth even with the least, I was pretty struck with the plot itself. Gives you a weird sense of mortality.