1) Stop deleting comments, it's bad for face value
2) PLOT TWIST

It's still prompting for passwords on any of the alternate chapters, I'm afraid.

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My editor is deleting his comments. He is deleting his proofreading edits which have spoilers.

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My apologies once more. It seems after you put a publisher key it will always expect a key,even though I have removed the key...I guess I'll have to post up all the chapters and make the story content page little messy.

3595993 Don't be I have reverted to plan C; showing all the chapters.

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Soon.

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}\ Nice work.

3594993 Sorry it was just proofreading comments from previous tinkering... I hope that's not too distressing.

3597176 Can I ask for a link to that wonderful picture?

Can you write a sequel please? One where all of the Elements of Harmony become brood mothers?

3600749 Thank you, I told PlumBuckeredout I wasn't perfect... Thanks for the help.

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Soon.

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You did ?

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Good spot! -edits-

3601908 Yes I did! ... I think..? Anyway, I'm not perfect.

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You sent out your edits,I fixed the errors....I'm not sure what else I could've done from that. -shrugs- Oh well. It's all a learning process.

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Thank you.

3602145 Okay yeah... Don't feel bad I don't know what I'm talking about either.

Infact you've been here longer than me! You should know these things already... ...Jks but yeah I guess I did do a good job, thank you.

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I've never used the password function until now!

Lesson learned, the sequel will be cleaner.

3603313 I'm glad to hear it! ... Or read it

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Russian! JK

Thank you very much! Maybe I should add you to my editing team...

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Hmm if I find any more errors, which is unlikely, that could be considered.

3614137 Also...you don't need to delete your comments.

(If anything it looks bad on my end.)

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Opps sorry. I wont delete any more.
And one more thing that is really bothering me
"Fluttershy's tears seize to the familiar voice"
It just doesn't sound right, I'm sorry if I'm pushing it but I think it should say something like
"Fluttershy's tears seized at the sound of that pleasantly familiar voice." It just flows smoother and sounds better to me

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You got it!

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Oh, maybe I should move to your ideas page for this stuff.

ok....familiar voice.........................different name??

i think somthing got mixed up in the story writing

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He is using a different name to go with his disguise.

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Your answer is in chapter 3 when Remnant and Flutters talk about harmony, and disharmony.

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The times when you want a :zerenesad: emote.

He's a changed pony! ...Or is he?

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You and your foreshadowing...

(is that spelled right)

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Yes, and yes.

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Dayummm

your fast

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You caught me when I was on. (I have google chrome give me notifications for Fimfic...don't want to miss anything )

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How do you do that I only get notifications through my email.

And I'm studying for semester exams by watching uncut naruto

which is why I'm not replying right away but still within the same day.

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I'm not sure on the exact How-to's...

-Browses- Ah! found it.

Edit account>Local settings, under 'Notification Settings'.

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Thanks

Darker than black version?

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Are you ing me?

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No, just feeling a LITTLE let down by it

this story... is there a sequel? it doesn't seem done... there is so much potential in this story...

I... well... you see... I really am lost for words. let me just say it like this, it doesn't seem complete, like there could be more and there just isn't, I like how it turned out but the means of getting to this point are wrongful, being that Flutters was raped and all, but it was for a change, a change that would reveal so much more. Please continue this fic, for all of us.

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In the works

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Read my blogs please.