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A collection of events with a mysterious blue stallion linking them all together.
If you're sad, lonely, or otherwise troubled, just keep an ear open, and you might hear a cathartic song being played just for you.
This is the myth of the Blues Traveller.
Work in progress, more characters will be added. Hope you enjoy everypony.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

Great story, I thought it was very nice. This may seem a bit off-topic, but it's nice to find someone else who has an appreciation for the blues.

3362483 Of course. As I mentioned in the author's comments, I love catharsis. One mof my favorite songs is "House of the Rising Sun" by the Animals.

Two questions I need to ask you:

1. Did the link in the middle of the middle work or did it distract from the rest of the fic?

2. As someone who seems to be a fan of blues, is there any chance you could give me some help in choosing songs to base my chapters around?

3362962 I didn't see any problem, it all worked out fine in my opinion. As for songs to make a story? How about something like "Born Under A Bad Sign" by Albert King?

Nice. Great song, too (I prefer Rock, but have always found other genres... enjoyable). And I feel the link was fine, as well. First one I actually listened to. Didn't listen till reading a few paragraphs, but your writing made me NEED to listen to it. Well done. I look forward to more.

3400186 Not to toot my own horn, but I'm very happy that the writing was good enough to make you go back and click the link you passed over. Admittedly the chapter was pretty much based around the music, so it is to be expected, but I'm still happy it worked out so well. Hope to see you back for chapter two, whenever I get it updated.

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As was I. That was why I made sure to point that out. And even if it is based around the music, the writing making you want to listen to a song from a genre you don't listen to means it is good writing.

And don't worry about update times. Usually takes me a good month or more to get around to starting (even if I have been thinking about it for a while)

3921191 Thank you!:scootangel:
I'm assuming you read both chapters. What did you like? Do you think I could improve upon anything? You know, aside from grammar and spelling.

I love the story so far. the same with the feels that you put inside both chapters, I am going to be honest with you I might have shed a few tears :pinkiesad2:
anyway I can't wait for an update. and I also can't believe this story only has 2 likes. (mine included) Keep up the good work!

3924593 I really appreciate the kind words. If I can make you cry that means I'm doing something right. Maybe you could recommend some groups to submit this to. I'm a total feedback whore.

Speaking of which what do you think of the Blues Traveller himself? Do you find his mystery intriguing?

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to be honest I don't really know what to think of him. he is mysterious and yet predictable (in a good way). But just like a lot of other readers, I can't say much about him yet until later chapters. :twilightsheepish:

3929052 Well the final chapter will put all his cards on the table, so I guess I'll see what you think then!

These two chapters have been wonderful, but the fact that it hasn't been updated in over 3 years makes me weary of adding it to my tracking list.

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