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This thing is a thing.
"Youngin'" would be fine in dialogue, however, looks weird outside of quotation marks. Youngster may be better or maybe even foal would be good here.
I am not sure what you are going for here, however, it may be Winona.
Aside from those, this story seems interesting, and I do love the Who Rules? universe. I will favorite, upvote, and follow you as well. I look forward to more, however, now, I must sleep. As Winston Churchill said, "KBO."
in teresting..i'll follow, if only to see what's goinf on. the summary was very vague and this prologue got me interested...what's it have to do with pinkie?
sooo at what part does this have anything to do with who rules?.....
I loved who rules? so I'll give this a chance, but from the opening that's the only reason why. Isn't buckskin a little redundant in this case as it's just saying a pony with ponyskin.
>>Actually, I'm very glad you brought this up. "Buckskin" refers to a specific color of pony. So do the terms bay, chestnut, palomino, and so on. Buckskins have a light brown, kinda tan, coat with a black mane & tail.
The more you know...
>>Oh, you'll see.
Warning: I am a tease. But, not for long. I always pay off with a happy ending.
3358744. Yikes! Bad writer! Bad, naughty writer who must be punished by means of...
Oh, uh, um, I mean, Thank you for finding my typos! I'll get those fixed up in a wee bit.
In the meantime, I officially declare Neko Majin C my Online Editor. That is, should you decide to accept this mission.
This post will self destruct in 10 seconds.
(boom)
Rats! It's still here. .
3360338 I cannot promise that I will find every little typo and grammatical error, however, I am honored for the position and will try my best.
3360451 I know you'll kick ass at it! I have faith in you. <hugs>
I came back to this chapter, as I usually do for my favorited incomplete stories, to see if there were any new comments. And, as I was scrolling through the chapter, this caught my attention:
"WHATARE" should be "WHAT ARE." KBO.
3366800. See? What did I tell you?
You rock. And you know it!