The End of An Adventure
Spike trudged into his treelike abode, worn out in body and spirit from the long day he had gone through. On top of his usual daily chores, he had also been helping Rarity out like he often does, except that this time, she had wanted him to model some dresses for fillies (the Cutie Mark Crusaders weren’t available because, according to Sweetie Belle, their future cutie marks were calling far away from her boutique). He was happy to help Rarity out, but he felt silly wearing dresses, especially the short ones that were designed to accentuate flanks he didn’t have. At least the longer ones made it easier to hide when his crotch got itchy and he had to scratch it. Rarity wouldn’t exactly find that classy, at least not until he was older.
Things really went south when a hydra starting rampaging the town. As it passed by Rarity’s boutique, Spike went out to try and reason with the hydra, but that didn’t go anywhere, because apparently just because dragons and hydras both had a “dra” in their names doesn’t mean that they get along. Also, it left a big pile of hydra dung next to the boutique, which ended up cutting negotiations short, especially for Rarity, who became vividly livid and swore she would turn the foul brute into a cutting-edge clothing line. Sadly for Rarity and the fashion world, Fluttershy came along at that moment to calm everyone down, and when that didn’t work, Twilight used a new tranquilizing spell she had learned to end the hydra menace. Rarity ended up needing the spell too, for obvious reasons.
And then came the lowest part of the whole experience: cleaning up all the hydra dung by himself. He probably could had gotten others to help him out (assuming there were ponies in Ponyville who couldn’t smell), but he had valiantly offered to do it all himself for the sake of his beloved, who was unfortunately too dazed by Twilight’s magic to really notice. The things he does for love! It was the grossest and smelliest evening of his life, and not the good kind of smelly like his feet usually were. By the time he had finally cleaned up all, the sun had fallen and bruised its heinie, and the spas were closed so he couldn’t even get the royal dragon’s treatment and become the limber, peppermint-scented heartbreaker that could have surely wooed his beloved Rarity if given the chance. Alas, he had to settle for washing himself off in a nearby pond, accidentally almost swallowing a leech and getting it stuck in his uvula in the process. How do these things keep happening to me?!
So it was that Spike returned home shortly after Twilight had turned in, who had at least been thoughtful enough to leave him a glass of milk and a granola bar with a thank-you note before hitting the hay, figuratively in this case, although she did once have to do so literally after a spell gone wrong. He guzzled down the cool milk, which managed to wash down the clingy uvula leech, but passed on the granola bar; he didn’t even like granola, Twilight was just trying to push it on him as part of her attempt to make him a healthy dragon. Ha, good luck with that!
Still, he knew he still had enough hydra dung stench on him that we wouldn’t be able to sleep near Twilight without her going ballistic, so it looked like it was the living room for him tonight. With a yawn, he dragged his drag-able dragon feet to the armchair by the unlit fireplace and curled himself up in its upholstery. At least this is classier than where I usually sleep…
Just then, Spike’s long-awaited trek into dreamland was interrupted by a tapping at the window on the front door. The young dragon suppressed a yelp of alarm and tiptoed cautiously to the front doors. “W-who’s there?” he asked, his boyish yet strangely womanish voice trembling with trepidation. “I’m warning you, I’m a dragon! You don’t want to mess with a dragon!” Wait, why am I so nervous about some light tapping at the door? I just survived a hydra AND cleaned up its poop! What do I have to be afraid of these days? …I really hope I don’t get an answer.
Thankfully, his fearful cry was answered by a familiar whistle, one that he had taught to a certain little bird ages ago. “No…it can’t be…” Spike ran over to the door and flung open the window, revealing a small, orange bird with a smile so bright it could be mistaken for a candle from far away.
“P…Peewee?”
The bird responded with a happy chirp and a quick dart to Spike’s chest, giving him a warm hug where his heart was, making it a literal heartwarming reunion, because puns are what truly keep Equestria alive.
“I can’t believe it!” Spike cried out, his eyes welling with tears, partly from joy and partly from their combined stench which they barely noticed. “You really came all this way to visit me? But I thought you were going to live with your family forever!”
Spike felt Peewee shake his head from their hug.
“You…you want to stay with me?”
A nod and a chirp from the chipper phoenix.
“Oh, thank you thank you thank you!” Spike exclaimed as he threw Peewee in the air in celebration. The two of them did a happy dance together, much like how a certain dog and bird liked to dance, at least until a familiar voice ruined their fun.
“Spike! Will you keep it down?!” Twilight yelled from her bedroom. “I’m trying to sleep!”
Spike and Peewee responded with simultaneous raspberries, followed by a round of giggles. “It’s so good to have you back, Peewee!” the young dragon said softly as he settled back in his armchair. “You’ve missed so much while you were away! Would you like to hear about the juicy stuff?”
Peewee nodded again and snuggled up against his beloved brother.
“Okay, little buddy, just sit tight, because these stories are going to take a while…”
The End
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Hmmmmm... *goes door to door* Hello. Have you accepted Peewee into your life?
Chanting: "Sequel".
Best ending ever.
Thank you so much for this wonderful tale.
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Well, the skits I mentioned will technically be sequels. I know it's not what you may have in mind, but it's something, right?
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Aw, thank you for being such a supportive fan! I hope I can continue to please in the future!
Perfect ending to a perfect story! Nice job Kelsey!
Something I think Peewee should do to Twilight
Yes, I'm sad this has come to an end, but you did so quite nicely.
I'm imagining Rarity's face right now and I'm smiling rather broadly. Am I a bad person?
Oh yes, I caught this:
Did you derp here, or do you consider the hydra a type of dragon/wyrm? I always likened them to serpents, myself.
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Whoops, my mistake!
I fixed it. Thanks for catching it!
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Say it with me:
"Adren is best editor"
A perfect end to a perfect story. And you can't imagine how glad I am that you are continuing this tale as well, be it spinoff or sequel
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Thank you so much!
You can't imagine how glad I am to have so many people enjoy my writing so much and want to see more! Especially when it comes to Peewee! I'm so happy he's getting the love and attention he deserves!
Woohoo complete and absolutely no dislikes
loved the whole story keep up the good work
Awwww, overall that was an adorable fic! And congratulations on finishing it!
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Thank you for your loving support! I hope my next fic pleases you!
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Aww, thank you for being such a wonderful fan!
Hope you enjoy your time here!
I approve, and I generally enjoyed the heck out of this story,
10/10, PLATINUM STAR-TIERED
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
I hope you enjoy the rest of what I have to offer.
Be sure to spread the word of Peewee to all your friends! He needs all the love he can get!
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Glad to hear you're enjoying it so much! I've always felt Peewee was sorely under-appreciated, so I figured I could be the one to give him the love he deserves!
Also, I’m a pretty big fan of your writings, so I’m rather flattered to see you returning the favor! Can’t wait to see the next awesome fic you write! It better star best dragon!
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Fixed “day” and made it “way”. Thanks for spotting that error!
Also, my apologies for that pun. I promise it will never happen again.
Nice.
It sure seems that way sometimes, don't it?
I enjoyed it very much! Colorful characters, a fun, humor-speckled adventure, and a few nice little twists near the end. Good show.
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Wow, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the adventure I thought up for the little phoenix! Here's hoping he gets more love in the future!
Hope you enjoy the next set of material I have for Peewee and Spike!
Aww, that was cute. Great story, friend!
Why are they not putting a Pee Wee Character Tag on this?!
7822625 Aww thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! Hope you like the follow-up story too!
We immediately need more stories with Peewee in them, luckily I'm always making sure to add the lovable phoenix in some way to stories I write with Spike. I loved everything about this story, if I could give more then one like, I damn sure would, have a follow and I'll be keeping an eye on your work, amazing job.
So great to read an adventure story that doesn't involve the human or romance tags. This is now one of my new favorite stories.
What we need now is stories involving Spike and Peewee's excellent adventures. And out of sheer morbid curiosity, I really want a story to see what happens with Rainey and that firefly.
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You know the design is almost close how Spike will look like if Spike was in the teenage years in the between the coronation and the last problem and I really wish Peewee was with them
Oh yeah after you left there was like the crystal Empire chosen to represent the Equestria games Spike had to babysit a couple of pets of the Mane 6 and Twilight became an Alicorn and not just any Alicorn a princess so a lot of things happen when you're gone little buddy
Wow that was a pretty nice story and pretty funny as well how Peewee went through so Spike had to clean up the hydras poop which that is super gross and not only that he is pretty tired after cleaning that up but things bright up for him when he saw Pee-wee and basically flew to him to give him a big hug and it's such a happy reunions between these two I've always loved to see something like that even though in the show they did meet up with each other but the reunions cut short but anyway this was a pretty good story keep up the good work