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I fooled you. I fooled you. I got horse stories. I got horse stories. I got all horse stories.

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This story is a sequel to The Syndicate


Spike stumbles upon the biggest conspiracy that Ponyville has ever known! With only his wits and a hard-boiled attitude, the square dragon will take down the lowlive thugs who threaten Equestria to ensure justice is served.

And also because he's really bored.

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Comments ( 7 )

Two things of note:

1.) Spike an an unreliable narrator.

2.) [youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=kbrhuUFjCII]

You should really play this at a certain part of this chapter and then for every chapter onwards. You'll know when to start.

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Spike is an unreliable narrator.

Yep. You can tell because Fluttershy certainly counts as a 'leggy dame', yet he doesn't mention it even once. :trixieshiftright:

Okay, this is gonna be interesting. *grabs popcorn*

Oh yeah. This is going to be very entertaining.

Big Question: Are you going to finish this?

7003083

Proooobably not. Interest kind of petered out, and for a sequel I don't really feel it's up to scratch quality-wise with The Syndicate.

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