He knew his friends didn't see him as a burden or a useless sidekick, but that didn't mean that he didn't feel like one compared to them. So while the Elements of Harmony and Glimmer went off on another adventure, he let them a letter and went out on a journey of his own. Not too shortly into his journey did he receive a helping hand and now a clear path on where to go. Now armed with only his pack, a map, a compass, and all that he has learned in his life; he will undertake the Trials of the King of Dragons. The question is, is he up to the challenge and can he take what he will learn at the end of it all?
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Lord Bahamut............ Also the name for the God of Dragons.
Just a tip...the story would be much easier to read if you changed the format. Right now, it just looks like huge blocks of text, and is not very easy on the eyes. The reader loses their place in the story quickly.
I had to stop after the first few blocks, just because it kept feeling like one giant run-on.
Make separate paragraphs every time there's a switch in dialogue, try to separate dialogue from non-dialogue run-ons, and try and divide non-dialogue paragraphs so that they're only five or six sentences at the most.
Will this continue?
Seeing Spike go on such a journey would be awesome.