The four remaining Jaegers(Crimson Typhoon, Gipsy Danger, Striker Eureka and Cherno Alpha) with 2 Kaiju's(Otachi and Leatherback) got teleported into Equestria. With an unexpected twist of turn that the Kaiju's could talk to the Jaegers and helping them, they must find a way to escape before they are caught by Princess Celestia, who wants to reverse engineer the Jaegers for their own use.
Meanwhile, Twilight and her friends comes up to another, but rather inoperable and deserted Jaeger, Coyote Tango. Putting their risks to the very limit, they must pilot the Mark I and help the remaining Mark I, III, IV and V Jaegers to escape, and might come up one of the most honorable but sad decision.
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You keep switching back and forth between present and past tense. I know this is something people have pointed out to you in your other stories.
An ideal crossover is readable by a person who likes one fandom, but maybe doesn't know so much about the others. If I didn't know anything about Pacific Rim, I would be completely lost. In the first paragraph, for example, you don't explain what a Kaiju or a Jaeger is. There aren't even any details to describe what they look like.
3349944 Oops. Yeah, I would probably do a narration of what a Jaeger looks like, and a Kaiju of course. I would also probably do a description of the Jaegers. Tnx for noticing for my mistakes and I will fix that.
Oh God, this movie.
This movie was... something else.
But props for doing something no one has done,
that no one should do.I wish you the best of luck with it.
3350234 Tnx man.
3350234 actually, it has been done already. (A Midsummer Night's Dream)
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Equestrian Rim
3392232 Hello sir! I read your story 'Equestria Rim' and I got inspired by this story and some others in due respect to right this story.
(P.S If you want to join the 'Alternate Ending for Pacific Rim Contest', it's fine by me. Not pushing you around so much though)
This was painful to read. Characterization is horrible, with a good amount of OOC. Grammar is atrocious and the story can't tell whether it wants to be present or past tense. The perspective changes are clunky and the dialogue is terrible. It's very mechanical with characters coming off as flat and lifeless. Details are kept to a bare minimum and the entire story pretty much hinges on people having seen the movie first because it doesn't do a thing to introduce the characters from Pacific Rim.
3440771 Well I'm planning an alternative to this story, after what happened in the film Pacific Rim.
No details, first of all.
Second, you kept saying that CT was going to slice off the dragon. What part of the dragon?
Third, mane six is so very calm about all of this. Why are they calm? A dragon simply snoring is enough for a mission from Celestia, yet when 4 Jaegers and a couple kaiju appear out of nowhere, they're as calm as if they were watching ants fight. These things were each the size of a large building on their own! Things large enough to wreck Canterlot call for panic, especially since they're all made to look imposing and they just decapitated two massive dragons.
fourth, why are they suddenly best friends that will fight for eachother, not asking themselves "Hey, weren't those guys trying to kill me less than a minute ago, and are allied with us even though nothing has changed?"
All in all, this is an ok concept, it just wasn't pulled off very well.
4320133 yeah :P My earlier stories have utter dogshittines
Absouloutely terrible yet absoloutely great at the same time
Should I report this story for the lack of character tags?
The Mane 6 tried to replicate Striker Eureka's Sacrifice. This story is dissapointing.