When words are all that matter, the way that they are said can make all the difference.
An experimental short story written for One-Shotober, made entirely of dialogue exchange. Occurs Post-Season 3, before EqG.
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Sounded like the characters, so good job.
Thankfully Rarity speaks distinctly enough to help make her speech stand apart.
Aye, interesting format. Luckily both Twilight and Rarity were very in character, otherwise I wouldn't have been able to tell who was speaking. The fact that you pulled it off properly is definitely saying something.
Very interesting. he characters felt true to themselves, without even needing to check the character tags. The conversation was well done too feeling a bit stilted and awkward like they're still working out the new dynamic. Bravo.