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  • E Dinky's First Kill

    Like every little filly, Dinky loves everypony and everything... except spiders.
    3,649 words · 6,259 views  ·  543  ·  6
  • E Whisk

    A colt and his fathers move to Ponyville to start a new life.
    13,364 words · 1,978 views  ·  115  ·  1
  • T Epic Unicorn History: The Beards of Harmony

    Barely three years old, the fledgling nation of Equestria is threatened by chaos foretold in a dream. It's up to Star Swirl and five erstwhile, beardy stallions to brave the Forest Ever Free in search of their only salvation.
    30,755 words · 2,226 views  ·  230  ·  5
  • E A Lovely Apology

    Spitfire decides to make up for an embarrassing mistake by inviting Filthy Rich out for a night on the town.
    6,802 words · 1,865 views  ·  139  ·  2
  • E The Sun Shines Brightest at Night

    Nightmare Moon's defeat meant more to Equestria than just the return of the sun and their Princess. Witness the conclusion of a story one thousand years in the making, through the eyes of a Hoofington nurse.
    6,108 words · 948 views  ·  91  ·  1
  • T Laugh, Laugh

    Though she admired him, Pinkie Pie was never close to Ponyacci. She wasn't expecting him to call her to visit. She really wasn't expecting to find him like this...
    1,122 words · 712 views  ·  114  ·  2
  • E ACT OF WILL

    A mysterious machine shows up in Ponyville, and things quickly get out of hoof.
    3,001 words · 3,377 views  ·  157  ·  4
  • E Treehouse

    She stumbles into the Whitetail Woods one last time, to finish what she'd started so many years before...
    1,988 words · 1,277 views  ·  103  ·  2

Blog Posts667

  • Tuesday
    Faun fan music!

    Reverbrony liked the story so much he wrote a song for it! It's some pretty cool dark ambient post-rock. Do check it out! (I'll post a Youtube link once he's uploaded it.)

    3 comments · 53 views
  • Monday
    New story: Vinyl Scratch Drops the Title

    https://www.fimfiction.net/story/10774/31/future-progressive-the-speedfics-and-drabbles-of-present-perfect/vinyl-scratch-drops-the-title

    Hey, the writeoff's over! I finished 5th and 19th. This one's number 19. :B Just a silly random comedy that is me completely not trying to do anything like write good jokes or good stories or good anything really. The punchline is dubstep. And BDSM. Yes, my speedfic collection is now rated Teen, just because of this one story.

    666 blog posts!

    8 comments · 79 views
  • Sunday
    IMDB is my TVTropes

    Pay close attention to the little girl in this promo clip:


    Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you: Andrea Libman.

    Wasn't even her first role!

    Isn't nature fascinating?

    12 comments · 83 views
  • Sunday
    Fic recs, November 23rd: Project Get! #3

    Ha haaa! I bet you thought I'd forgotten about this, eh? Well, fret no more! It's just the nature of the various reading projects I've set up that I do a little for each here and there before releasing one.

    Also I bet you thought I was running out of SONATA PICS YEEEAAAAHHH!

    H: 0 R: 1 C: 5 V: 1 N: 3

    You Learn by A Hoof-ful of Dust

    Genre: Slice of Life

    Three looks at Apple Bloom learning things. It’s not quite a kishotenketsu, I don’t think, but if you go into this expecting a normal mode of storytelling, you’ll be left scratching your head. Here’s the clue: the final scene is meant to be compared to the first two. Once you know that, the rest should come. Beyond narrative technique, this also features some really excellent writing (and hey, it even passes the Zecora test!) Not much happens, but it’s a very pleasant read and gets its point across in a refreshingly unique way.

    Recommended

    The Lucky Ones by Educated Guess

    Genre: War

    A scene during the siege of a fortress. This was written for one of the World-Building Alliance things, but the world-building is really haphazard. It comes off as a list of names that refer to nothing at all, and there isn't really anything pony about it, aside from a horse pun and the mention of the pony races. I like that seaponies are a major part of this, but I can’t say the actual details of their society were terribly interesting. Mostly, I just couldn’t figure out what the hell was going on. Only attempt this if you don’t mind everything being completely alien.

    Not Recommended

    The Baltimare Chase by DegeTheMighty

    Genre: Chase Scene

    Shining Armor pursues a fugitive through town. For just being a long action scene, this is really intense and it grabbed me immediately. There’s no real explanation for how they got into this situation, but the action flows smoothly and the writing is evocative. That said, it could also use some cleanup; this feels like a first draft, with typos, LUS, and some passages that need tightening down. Still, if you like action scenes, this is pretty short, and has a couple neat ideas to boot.

    Recommended If You Don’t Mind LUS

    Winter Threads by Dreamy Days

    Genre: Slice of Life

    A pegasus walks around Manehattan and thinks about all the ponies who he could help, but can’t. He does end up helping one, thank goodness, because this would have been very dull otherwise. I once wrote a story where the narrator wandered around his town, commenting on the bleak bleakness of everything about him, and the first third or so of this made me think of it (and how awful it was). Instead, what we get is a lesson in the value of kindness, wrapped in some fairly lackluster and unfocused writing. Not to mention, it’s very Earth-analogue. (I can’t imagine a pony threatening another the way the bellhop does; also why is it the bellhop’s business who’s paying what for their room?) I suppose this might be worth it if you need something to restore your faith in humanity.

    Vaguely Recommended

    On a Cool Summer Night by psp7master

    Genre: World-Building

    In the early days of Equestria, a stallion from Saddle Arabia is called under the tutelage of Star Swirl the Bearded. What caught my attention is that, when writing about ancient Equestria, we usually just write about, well, Equestria. I’ve never even considered what the zebras or anyone else might have been doing at that time. That said, this does have some problems, all of them conceptual. (Well, I did tire of the continual stream of honorifics directed at the Queen, but that at least fits.) I was charmed by the idea that Saddle Arabia is matriarchal, just like Equestria, so the slightly less appealing aspects snuck up on me. Yeah, Islamic culture is just sort of copy-pasted into this as world-building, and while the ending is nicely surprising, well… The confluence of the events with what goes into them is problematic, to say the least. I did at least enjoy it while reading.

    Recommended If You Like World-Buidling

    Leaving the Ground Behind by q97randomguy

    Genre: Inner Monologue

    A pegasus mailpony — no, not that pegasus mailpony — makes a delivery and contemplates the joys of flight. I’m surprised by this, because it gets somewhat poignant by the end. I mean, this is just a character sketch for an OC, but the character ends up being pretty compelling. Interesting.

    Recommended for Slice of Life Fans

    Folksong by Adda le Blue

    Mature: Sex

    Genre: Personal Writing

    Most of this reads like free-verse poetry, with a staccato, otherworldly feeling to the writing. It’s very hard to figure out what’s going on, but in a way that only makes you want to read further. Here’s what I know: the main character is a pegasus, part of the Royal Guard, and, I think, was originally human. Or else visited the human world once. She plays guitar. She’s learned that her father died. She has tumultuous sex with an unknown stallion. She blacks out from drinking too much and wakes up in Princess Luna’s bed, which is where things get considerably more concrete. Given the mental impairment, I think the scattershot writing really fits the mood, if nothing else. I do feel like there are one or two details this might need, just so we can draw solid conclusions by the end, but I’d recommend this just for the experience. I’ve definitely not read any fics like it. Check it out if you're up for a challenge!

    Recommended for Fans of Experimental Writing

    What Color Are My Eyes? by Protopony350

    Mature: Gore

    Genre: Horror

    Vinyl Scratch sets the record straight about the color of her eyes. Do not read this without heeding the warning in the description, it is very a propos. I wish I had more positive things to say about this. The idea is creative, and the final line is just perfect, not to mention I got a perverse kick out of Vinyl’s thinking that a pony with a scalpel cutie mark was a doctor. Unfortunately, this doesn’t have much going for it other than shock value. The writing is rushed and full of typos, and there is definitely room for expansion. I think the only people who would want to read this are those who enjoy gorefics.

    Not Recommended

    Eyes on the Road by Art Inspired

    Genre: Drama

    Lightning Dust tries to redeem herself in Rainbow Dash's eyes and be recruited into the Wonderbolts. This gets off to a poor start with a telly prologue that lays out just how things have changed since Wonderbolt Academy. The writing continues to be telly, and in need of a good proofread, as we move into the main portion of the story. Now, this does set up some good interpersonal tension, and I liked Spitfire’s dynamic with Lightning Dust. But all of that is dropped for chapters two and three, which are a lengthy action scene involving a race to determine the next Wonderbolts recruit. This is a setup I have some issues with, but really, it’s not the worst part of this story. Rather, the author attempted a “it doesn’t matter who wins, the important thing is they make up” ending, which would have been the right thing to do if so much attention hadn’t been put onto the race. I didn’t like the race segment, but I wanted to know who won! That kind of ending only works when the personal drama is front and center. Suffice to say, I found this story supremely unsatisfying to read, and it would take a lot of work to improve it.

    Not Recommended

    Ra Ra Raspberry by Loganberry

    Genre: Historical Crossover by Way of Musical Reference

    The tragic tale of Raspberry Ripple, who loved too much. If you are not up on memes — and I mean really up on them — you will miss out on this story’s central joke. However, you might still get the historical references, so there’s something to be said for this; knowing the referenced song will thus explain why certain odd choices in telling the story were made. I was charmed by the storyteller approach, which helped wave away some of the flimsier parts of the story, as well as the “alternate Equestrias” framing narrative. I can’t really think of anything else to say that wouldn’t spoil it. I guess, if you read it and are still confused, click on this for the answer. (But not before, I’m serious!)

    Recommended If You’re Knowledgeable About Memes

    13 comments · 181 views
  • Saturday
    Fic recs, November 22nd

    Jeff Burgess, possibly our fandom’s best musician, has written a concept album based on Device Heretic’s story Eternal. (That’s the Youtube link, not the story link.) It’s a really great album, especially if you’re into indie and/or experimental music. Check it out!

    If you thought the ride was over, well brother, you were wrong! (And whooooooa this one’s not Sonata!)

    It's weird how much my reading schedule depends on me walking on the treadmill in the morning. c.c I haven't done that all week, but it's time for this dry spell to end! In the meantime, have a bunch of stuff Youtube picked out for me. :B Also, my 1500th review, and oh, what a story it happens to be!

    H: 1 R: 3 C: 0 V: 0 N: 1

    A Muddy Hole by PoweredByTea

    Reading by DeftFunk

    Genre: Comedy

    A behind-the-scenes from Sisterhooves Social, answering the question: How did Applejack get Rarity into that mud pit? Applejack’s usual roles among her friends in fanfic are either straightmare or well-meaning antagonist. This story shows just how much comedic potential she has: more, I’d say, than even the show writers consider using. It’s wonderful watching her snark her way through helping Rarity, and I got a kick out of the schadenfreude. This is rather straightforward, but nevertheless some of the best AJ/Rarity interaction I’ve seen outside of shipping.

    Recommended

    Hearth’s Warming Eve by Admiral Biscuit

    Reading by Hero541

    Genre: Holiday Special

    Dinky and Sparkler try to make Hearth’s Warming Eve special for their hard-working mother. There really is not a lot to this story; it’s short, heartwarming fluff. But for once in my life, I actually like short, heartwarming fluff, because I have lived this story. My dad’s a mail carrier, and many are the Christmas Eves we stayed up watching the snow and hoping he would make it home. We’re lucky he carries in an affluent Cleveland suburb, because around Christmas, he could bring home hundreds of dollars in tips in a day, as well as fancy candies, cookies and other items we’d never have a prayer of affording on a regular basis. So remember to tip your letter carrier around this time of year, and your paper carrier too, if you get it delivered. You’ll help make someone’s holiday brighter.

    Recommended

    Treadmill Twilight by Derpator

    Reading by Akash the Reader

    Genre: Comedy

    Twilight thinks Pinkie called her fat, so she’s burning calories on a treadmill. Part of me wonders if I would have liked this more had I been reading it while on the treadmill myself, but I think the answer is “no”. The characters are all good, but the writing is plain and fraught with errors. The narrative continually finds ways to repeat itself, like in the first few paragraphs, where both Pinkie and Twilight confirm that Twilight is wearing Pinkie’s workout clothes. (Something I really need to see, just sayin’.) Attempts to be descriptive stumble over themselves, we’re constantly reminded of what each character knows, and the telly narrative focuses on the oddest things. I can’t help but think this might be sweat fetish fuel. I laughed at a couple lines, but there’s not much point to this.

    Not Recommended

    The Best Present She Could Ask For by theswimminbrony

    Reading by Dr. Wolf

    Genre: Mother’s Day Special

    Dinky wants to give her Mommy a card for Mommy’s Day, but Mommy is too tired to notice. It’s a very odd quirk of fate that I got two holiday-themed Derpy’s family fics in a row. Like Hearth’s Warming Eve, this one goes for the d’awws, and Dinky is so fucking precious that she flips the dial from “ugh” to “wait, I actually like this”. This doesn’t offer a whole lot more, story-wise, than that previous fic, but I found myself enjoying it from start to finish. It gets a little melodramatic in the middle, and it definitely seems to drag on past where it should have ended, while quoting numerous classic fan comics (I think), but honestly, if you’re looking for something cute and heartwarming, look no further.

    Recommended

    A Moment in the Sun by Chengar Qordath

    Reading (part 1) by Goombasa

    Review #1500!

    Genre: Tragedy

    The tragic downfall of Sunset Shimmer, student of Princess Celestia. This is, without a doubt, one of the best tragedies I have ever read. Despite knowing how it’s going to end (though, vague spoiler, it doesn’t quite butt up against Equestria Girls), watching Sunset slowly dig herself deeper and deeper was delicious. The things she says toward the end just took my breath away. This is a look at how compelling self-fulfilling prophecies can be, and how impossible it is to break oneself from the habits of delusional thinking. There’s also some very timely stuff in there about how we view our success versus that of others. On top of that, it’s a very compelling look at Sunset as a character. Her voicing is excellent, whether filly or adult, and she’s set up as a very believable anti-Twilight: she doesn’t see the value in friendship and steadfastly refuses to listen to any of Celestia’s attempts to push her in the right direction in that regard. She also has crippling mommy issues, which was one of my favorite things about this. And it’s not just her who has a tragic flaw: Celestia openly shares the blame for what happens to Sunset, and if she can be accused of anything, it’s underestimating the effect she has on other ponies. Cadence also shows up halfway through as an unexpected but perfect foil for Sunset (this plays heavily off Cadence’s backstory from the first novel, fyi). Missteps were few and easy to sum up: a few word choices in the first chapter didn’t fit a filly; there are a number of spots toward the end where characters repeat themselves, to no real effect; and use of the word ‘plot’. (I have a slight quibble with the very end, too.) In all, this is a marvelous, emotional, very intense piece and I am definitely looking forward to the sequel.

    Highly Recommended

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It's been five years since she first met them, and most of Twilight Sparkle's friends have found love, leaving her feeling left out and unwanted. The Winter's Eve Ball promises a magical night of mystique and romantic wonder, but will Twilight's romantic notions get the best of her? Based on the song by the Fireman.

Originally published on Equestria Daily November 29, 2011.

Be sure to check out the song by Baron Thyrai!

First Published
3rd Mar 2012
Last Modified
3rd Mar 2012
#1 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

This wasn't on here earlier? I'm quite surprised.

One of the first ships I've read, and one of the most memorable at that. Glad to see it on here.

#2 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

...you don't need to dance to be high...:moustache:

Just sayin!:trollestia:

#3 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

This was the second ship I've ever read. And it's, to this date, the best thing ever.

Glad to see it here.

#4 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

One of my favorite one-shots. Good to see it on here!

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer
#5 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

>>282914

I've only just come to fimfic; I use EQD as my primary site. But I'm posting this here to see what happens, basically.

#6 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Fantastic story- one of the first I've ever read. :twilightsmile:

>>282946

feature box ahoy

#7 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

I remember when this was on EqD.  Delightful story!  I'll have to read it again now that it's on here.

#8 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Excellent! :rainbowkiss:

#9 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Already read it, so insta-fav and thumbs up! glad to see this of Fimfiction!

#10 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

FINALLY I FOUND THIS STORY AGAIN!

On a serious note I was looking far and wide to find this story again since it was just that awesome when I first read it... Time to read it again!

:twilightblush::rainbowkiss:  This story is what introduced me to the concept of Twidash and how awesome it is!

#11 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

I read this a while back on fimfiction and wow was it good. I really loved it. So cute and well written. Its too bad Dash had to fuck all those other ponies before getting with Twi, even if she loved her....

Alexstrazsa
Moderator
#12 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Quite simply my favorite one shot fic ever.

#13 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Great to see this get more exposure. Now I can stalk you better too.:rainbowwild:

#14 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Pretty amazing.  Not sure why there's so many dislikes, being such a quality fic and all.

#15 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

good tah see this story ere'. loved it when ah first read it, and it got me intah fanfics. ah can't thank ya enough fer writin' this.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer
#16 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

>>283121

Much obliged. :) You're a good commenter, it's nice to have you around!

>>283123

Shipping haters? On my fimfic? It's more likely than you think.

>>283138

Wow! Now that's just a wonderful thing to say! :D I can't thank you enough for reading it!

#17 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Life lost meaning, because this was so-

*crack*

CRAP, my heart breaking

Eurghhhh...

So beautiful...

seriously... So good

*crack crack crack*

*sniffle*

The best i ever read

I now go to heaven...

*crackaBOOM*

#18 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

First time I've ever read this. This story has all my love :heart:

#19 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Random Thought for Today: If Harry Potter was a pony, he'd have a cutie mark for cock-blocking Ron.

#20 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Wow.

That was awesome.:rainbowkiss:

Ah, TwiDash, so amazing...

#21 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

I loved this fic, glad to see that its finally on here.:yay:

#22 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

After reading this story, I really want it to be continued into further installments! It may have been written as a one-shotter, but something about the ending and style sets it up to be a fantastic full-on story. :twilightsmile:

#23 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

A beautiful love story.  :rainbowkiss: :twilightblush:

#24 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Pelase tell me you're going to resurect this story into a series with some more chapters!:pinkiegasp:

#25 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

this is awesome, nuff said.:rainbowkiss:

#26 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

I remember first coming to Equestria Daily and seeing this on the front page. It was my first fanfic, I'm happy to see it's finally up on here man, thanks:heart:

#27 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

All my love and affection! :heart:

As well as a favorite and a watch. :twilightsmile:

#28 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

I was cleaning my knife after hunting and was enjoying the story until the mystery stallion was revealed.

I can never find this lesbian love between any mane6 character possible and when it happens, I am greatly disturbed.

That's just me though, i've seen worse... the clopfics, the POW's. Christ.

#29 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

Oh I'm so happy to see this here. I first saw it on EQD and loved it. Then I couldn't remember enough of it to go searching but huzzah it is here now. And great thing is i can get it as .epub and read it at work on break :twilightsmile:

#30 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

>>283646

Just do what I do, John.

Consider everyone in Equestria universally omnisexual. No sexuality, no race, and species doesn't matter either. It's peace, John. Peace.

#31 · 142w, 4d ago · · ·

I remember this!!:twilightsmile::rainbowwild:

Glad to see it here so I can add it to my list of fics Ive read

Keep em coming here!

#32 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

i enjoyed reading thins again.  still puzzled as to why straight guys don't get all the 2 chicks stuff.  I mean, we're talking a matriarchal society and an 8-2 female to male ratio, here.  besides, how often do you get to see Dash trying to be charming?

#33 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Lovely story, thanks for posting it here.

#34 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Who the hell downvoted this?

#35 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Daw, :twilightsmile: but the way you spelled the owls name was uncommon. Hehe

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer
#36 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

>>283995

There's like two different accepted ways to spell it. :V

Thanks everyone who commented on this. @_@ I seem to have created a monster.

To anyone asking for a continuation, I'll say what I did on EQD, and that is I've got a sequel planned but it's not high on my priorities right now. Still simmering, as it were. Rest assured you'll see more sometime!

#37 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Bravo.:yay:

#38 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

I remember when this was posted on EqD! Glad to see it here on FimFiction!

This was a great read, but looking at it again, I think 'somepony' would just as well as 'someone'. I dunno. We're all just used to seeing it as that in fanfiction at this point, I guess!

Thanks for posting it here. I got to enjoy it all over again!

#39 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

First time reading it and i loved every minute i even looked up the picture before reading and got a little scepticle about it but ignored it and read on

#40 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Ooh, this is here now? Excellent.

#41 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

I had just read this on EqD. Quite a coincidence indeed! Going back to the story, I'll say this: This is truly one of the best shipping fics, and in general one of the best fanfics I've read. It wasn't one of those clopfics for sex or even one of those "perfect" love-stories. This was realistic while showing genuine love. I think my favorite part is when Rainbow Dash confesses. It even involves my head-canon of Twilight/Rainbow Dash which is Rainbow Dash admiring how smart Twilight is and thinking she herself is an idiot. Mentioning that, I love the TwiDash shipping because I love jock/nerd couplings. There is something so adorable when the jock likes the nerd instead of the cheerleader. I personally think Twilight could keep Rainbow Dash grounded without being so forceful like Applejack would (Don't get me wrong AppleDash fans, I'm a fan of that shipping too.) while Rainbow Dash could help Twilight become a little more extroverted without being so abrupt like Pinkie Pie (Nothing against you Twinkie fans either!). Plus they're in the way the two most important of the mane six. Twilight leads the group and Rainbow connected them together.

Sorry for a paragraph comment :twilightblush: Overall I love this story :heart:

#42 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Awesome story, I had a feeling that Rainbow Dash would do something like that.

#43 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Oh, yay, this made it to Fimfiction! I'm so happy to see it here, as I've had problems setting up an account to comment at Equestria Daily and therefore haven't been able to review the stories there that only have Google Docs links.

First off, extra points for referencing a Paul McCartney song--and it's a very lovely song, too. Also, not only is this one of my favorite shipping fics that I've read, it's my most favorite TwiDash. I love the pacing here, how it allows for the creation of atmosphere and nuanced characterization. I loved Twilight's letter, and I loved everything about the dashing stallion (especially once we find out just who he is). And the climatic scene in the kitchen was wonderful--a tense conversation between two old friends, laying out all their truths, providing for such an interesting and meaningful contrast to the fairy tale romance of their shared dance in the sky.

I also really liked many of the smaller details. The bit about Rarity's secret love affair, Pinkie's hit or miss love life, Pinkie holding a rolling pin while yelling at Dash in the kitchen. It's easy to lose the side characters in a romance, as one focuses on the two characters being paired, and I didn't feel as though that happened here. I like that all of the Mane Six got to at least put in an appearance.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

>>284254

Ha! I find it amusing that you felt the need to try to head off a shipper war by preemptively placating the AppleDash and TwiPie shippers. :pinkiehappy:

... BUT YOU DIDN'T SAY ANYTHING ABOUT US RAINBOWPIE FANS. I shall consider that a declaration of war. Have at you! :raritywink:

#44 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

That was amazing.

#45 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Am I the only one who misread the title?

#46 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

>>284319 Maybe I should have left that out *shrugs* As for RainbowPie, I see them as best friends, but could really see it working as a couple too. I guess anybody can start a war these days :s

#47 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Was not expecting this story to be this epic, was pleasantly surprised...at four in the morning.

#48 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

Simply brilliant. Loved the description of the characters. Flowed seamlessly. I never saw Dash and Twilight as viable ship, but your work made me rethink that.

Amazing, Keep up the good work

#49 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

:yay:When it was posted on Eqd, It was my Bff's Birthday!:pinkiegasp:

#50 · 142w, 3d ago · · ·

And they kissed and became a couple.

NOW THAT'S THE HAPPY ENDING. But, seriously. It was great.

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