More poems! Even better!
1. Rainbow teaches Scootaloo how to fly.
2. A short poem about Twilight.
3. Applebloom wishes she was a Unicorn.
4. Twilight responds, and tells her she's great as she is.
5. Applebloom gets her cutiemark in art by writing a poem about bedtime.
6. A prologue to the last sweet storm poem.
7. Rarity teaches Sweetie Belle magic.
8. Applejack teaches Applebloom about being an Earth Pony.
9. Rarity, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash tell their sisters how much they love them.
Sequel to My Little Poems. Read them in any order you like!
Chapters (1)
Pretty good!
I'm noticing several spelling errors, but otherwise, these are good!
Keep it up.
-Inspiration
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this is good.......although I like the first one better! Keep writing!
~pixellprincess
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ur welcome
Congratulations! This story has officially been deemed an Emerald by The Gem Hunters.
Far better written than the first one, the only things that threw me off were a couple of spelling errors, and the length, but other than that, nice work.
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A Gem Hunter's Emerald
Accepted into the Literary Value Archive with a composite score of 120
Congratulations, the story has been accepted with honors.