"Anyone who takes himself too seriously always runs the risk of looking ridiculous; anyone who can consistently laugh at himself does not." -Vaclav Havel
There's a place just outside of Ponyville that Scootaloo goes when she's upset. It's a steep, grassy hill, and she goes there now, to be away from autumn and from empty places that don't have Rainbow Dash. There, amid the wild silver geese, Fluttershy finds her.
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I like it. Ill track.
This was great. Keep up the good work.
•Pip
i love it and can you make a story in the future about Fluttershy adopting Scootaloo and with Slice of Life stuff in it
this is good hope it turns into a scootadoption
Nice, but it's such a jarring contrast to show kind Fluttershy, sad Scootaloo, and eeeeeevil geese. (I'm picturing Canada geese. They get really hostile in spring.)
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Thank you so very much Earlie, this is simply beautiful. I too love autumn, it really is a beautiful time of the year. Can't wait for fall to really kick in here in Michigan, see all the leaves change, ya know how it goes! Anyways, thanks again, this is a really beautiful little story you've got.
P.S. I hate to say this, but right at the end you wrote "ting" instead of "wing" (at least, I assume you meant to write "her small wings buzzed rapidly"). Just thought you'd like to know.
Is this really complete?
3268580 Essentially, yes. ^^ It was, as I said, how much I could write in an hour.
3270096
Okay, It just seemed rather open ended.
This story was beautiful. The words you used to describe the setting painted vivid pictures on the canvas (it's all in my head. They said it would stop!). I find it frustrating to take into account that I can never achieve such sympathy from viewers in my writing. Therefore, I congratulate you for breaking that barrier of emotion. Keep up the fantastic work!
*makes ScootaDodo joke*
Checkmate.
3315347
Your reasoning is flawed. Dodos taste like chicken.
I love autumn, too! It gives you the emotion of nostalgia and relaxation! Also, amazing story!
3315347 What comic is your avatar from?
3268580 What does the writing in your avatar say?
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
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Can we go practice flying Rainbow Dash?
5569459 It's actually from an old TV show called Count Duckula.
Specifically at 10:16 of this episode.