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Uberdeathninja


I am the darkness, the evil in men, the heart and mind of the swarm. Hatred is my sword, and heavy metal is my shield. You don't like me? too fuckin' bad.

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Humanity, a species long thought exterminated by Celestia during her early reign, and now regarded as a terrifying legend. However, this changes when one reappears near the Everfree forest after a sting of dissapearances, all vastly unpleasant. This human, however, is vastly unlike the creatures of lore, being much larger and uncivilized than humans of legend. Also, unlike known humans, this one turns into a great, reptilian beast when angered, among other abilities. Luna, never having never seen a human before, wants to civilize it, and possibly use it as a secret weapon. Celestia, having supposedly eliminated humanity in the first place, wants it gone. But what say does the poor human get in this? None, as he can't speak Equestrian. That's not going to stop him from having an opinion, though.
(please read the author's notes when you can, they are usually important.)

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 298 )

you have piqued my interest. :twilightsmile: keep going

he seems to be a perversion of your typical druid, or maybe not as unicorns in this world represent civilization instead of the purity of nature

Holy shiz nuggets that was awesome..and FINALLY CELESTIA IS THE TRUE EVIL PERSON, NOT LUNA, NOT THE PEOPLE, BUT CELESTIA THE BASTARD HERSELF!! AND TO ANYONE TRYING TO DEFEND HER, SHE CELESTIA ATTACKED US HUMANS FIRST.

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Indeed. Now that see the truth, the learning can begin.

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No, I will drag it out as long as possible to prolong your suffering.

"In a scenery, I once saw, there was a modest tranquility, and there was a small hope. And when they were trampled upon, a man rose against it. In his hand was hope. The hope of humanity. With enourmous strength, the man fought... And learned of despair."

Comment posted by Uberdeathninja deleted Sep 28th, 2013

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Yep. I write stories. So what?

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Well you're really good at writing stories.
You, my good Ninja, have gotten a new follower.

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Why thank you. Please check out my other stories, too, would you kindly?

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The wild will prevail.
It always does in the end.

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Will humanity ever rise again or will they be gone forever. Either way, Celestia must be brought to justice.

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You will see soon enough, my friend. That's how stories work, right?

Wow.....she's actually sounding...not worthy of absolute hate here. Still need to see Mane six's reaction to the knowledge of what she did.

i hate this type of celestia so much, just like manipulative celestia.
shes prob going back on her word like a bitch.
then she prob almost dies.

WOW, Celestia such a hypocrite claiming this human to be a beast and a monster, yet she committed genocide out of fear and cursed the only survivor to a life of pain and loneliness, and she'd rather kill him then apologizes and try to redeem herself with him, Celestia's the real monster here.:flutterrage::twilightangry2::trixieshiftleft:

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He's not lonely. He has the whole forest as his friend, hence his "Pack-mates".

3278901 Still I hope Celestia get what she deserves, I know Twilight won't ever approve of her actions when she finds out.

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Assuming the human/beast doesn't eat her, that is.

3273400 Semper fi to human traits. we will stop the tyrant or die trying.

Semper Fi = always loyal.

USMC(marines) motto.

3278563 true it can be cliche but i like celestia being evil SOME times...:trollestia:

Celestia: purposely destroys every human in the world for "gain" and because we are "dangerous"(ok that is a point to some extent but not enough for genocide...) and then she has the NERVE to try and kill the last human because earth/equestria isnt his "home" ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME CELESTIAA?!??! WE COULD HAVE LIVED AMONGST EACH OTHER AND YOU HAVE THEMOTHERFUCKING NERVE TO SAY ITS ALL OUR FAULT?!!? NO IT IS ALL YOUR! FAULT CELESTIA! NOW TAKE THIS SHIT LIKE A WOMAN. Er mare?

usually i would say to forgive but celestia committed textbook genocide i hope she dies or even better have twilight find out and disowns her the last part with twilight is a must thought. i am still peeved that Luna did not get as mad as she should have towards her sister or arrest or something on the spot when she found out. all in all something needs to happen to celestia to punish her for this most evil act she just cant go unpunished

Yay, genocide!

3282245 Mah tits are calm. im just ranting :P if i rant that is a good thing. it means i like the story.

~Nightmare (this story gets a 8/10 currently :D you get the 9 with more updates)

E: just finished latest chapter. my rating is still an eight but this was a very nicely done chappy :)

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I'll get right to that update soon, just calm down.

This human must be allowed to carry out his vengeance!

3310705 killing her for payback are become a genocidal monarch with a god complex?

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I think we should just let the madness unfold, don't you?

this is amazing. quite worth the read. keep it going!!!!

luna is sleeping with a god knows how old human...this is the start of a possibly beautiful relationship xD

this is awesome!

~Nightmare

Victim of circumstance. he wouldn't have become psychopathic beast if it weren't for her.

Bahh what a faggot.:pinkiesick:
Complete fail to make the character likable and sensitive.

"...monsters aren't born, they're made...”


― C.J. Roberts

Jesus! i never hated celestia so much, ever! but this story has taken my hate so high.

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