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The Doctor's Office

Rainbow Dash is scheduled for a Doctor's appointment and fears she might receive a shot in her flank.

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Diablomuerte2

Diablomuerte2 #3 · Sep 18th, 2013 · 1 · ·

The story was alright, I liked the interactions in the beginning but I doubt Fluttershy would laugh at Rainbow Dash's pain... nor would a doctor be as unprofessional as to mimick a patient in front of a visitor in the lobby.

Last bit of annoyance was how much of a wuss you made Rainbow Dash because of a needle. She smashes trees and takes head on collision with boulders I doubt a needle would make her frightened.

Other than that I said it was an alright story up until the whole hospital scene.

Zeyon The Green

Zeyon The Green #4 · Sep 18th, 2013 · · ·

Just to tell you it is bone density not bone decency. Also drop the mentally in thought, if she is thinking then it is mental and that is redundant. I don't think she was thinking with her other body parts. Fluttershy is OOC at the end.

Over all a pretty entertaining story. Keep writing.