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Gypsy Writefag
I mainly write smut and some occasional PG-13 stuff.
Gypsy Writefag
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17 moves? I expected more from the princess of the night! I should have been smashed after three moves!
3214672
Perhaps it has to do with the subject being too outlandish. So far removed from the realms of reality that people cannot enjoy the story.
You could bring in 50 Astartes legionaries to dethrone Princess Celestia only to have them realize their error through the magic of friendship and have them live peacefully for eternity as guards to the princess. Or you could have Princess Celestia use Sarin gas on her subjects only to have Barack Opony make a fool of himself. Or you could have the cutie mark crusaders get their cutie marks thus removing their relevance to the story line all together.
Those are all understandably acceptable ideas that readers can grasp.
However, even in a world that accepts magical flying ponies, chess will never lead to sex. Ever.
3214848
It seems I still have much to learn in the art that is writing.
Thank you for showing me the error of my ways. It is only through the wisdom of the veterans that I may further improve as a human, and for your thoughtfulness, I thank you.
Already I feel the enlightenment shining down upon me, and I will atone for my literary sins immediately.
3214869
You flatter me though I assure you that I am no veteran. I deserve neither honour or praise for my comments were made purely as a jest.
I often find myself purplexed in my own writing quandaries. I intend to improve; having acquired membership to this site in hopes that readers, unknown to me, could advise me with out being too critical of my performance.
I have yet to rate others stories. I feel that I lack the merit to give my votes any worth. In the belittled state that I find myself, I do not restrain my ability to be cordial. Witticisims to elevate foul moods is a service I can provide without regard as to how well my stories are accepted by the community.
(Yup, its a slow day at work.)
3214699 I once tried to beat someone in chess in just 5 moves. Dumbass left his king exposed at the first move already.
There should be a sequel where the main character actually wins the chess match against Luna.
3215159
It could happen, only on the Hub!
Seriously though, this is just a random one-shot, and it won't be continued.
That pic of Luna is freaking awesome!
Wow Luna can use her mist form for sex?! Sir I think you just gave me a new fetish.
I was joking about the fetish part if anyone thinks im serious.
3215471
I'll make it your fetish, whether you like it or not!
3215476
Um... Yeah about that, you see the reason I can't let this be my fetish is, because smoke bomb!
"Throws a smoke bomb on the ground and proceeds to make a quick get away."
3215570
You've activated my trap card, Fetish Indoctrination!
3215575
Hard as it is to believe. Good clop fics (There are so very few) actually have set-ups that make the situation as believable as possible. This has no set-up AT ALL. The chess match is lost from the very beginning. There is no explanation for why this is Luna's prize for her winning. In fact how would this not be considered a prize for the protagonist as well? For what it is, which as you stated is no story, just clop. It gets the job done. And the way in which Luna had sex with the protagonist was enjoyably fresh. You get an up vote and a fave from me. If it had even the slightest set-up, I would have ranked it higher. Much higher.
If that were me I would not be in a pleasure spasm, but rather be emotionless. =_=
3215362
aw...
But that mist is filthy! It was crawling all over the place in the pilot episodes!
3216940
Fully agreed. And thank you.
3214672 I have this idea that before anyone can down vote a story, they have to provide at least a 10 word summary explaining why. That way, trolls can be easily identified and their down votes can be disregarded as irrelevant.
3219351
I really don't mind downvotes. I just think it's kinda funny that people actively seek out things they don't enjoy in order to leave dislikes.
Your idea could work, though, but you'd still get the downvotes, so I don't really see the point.
3219371 Because people don't always leave comments of constructive criticism. My idea would force people to reveal whether they're trolling for the reason you stated, or are genuinely disappointed in the story's quality.
3219418
I understand that, but if people left downvotes plus a random hateful comment (not constructive criticism), you'd still have the downvotes on your story. Granted, the author would able to rule out downvotes left by such people, but they'd still be there on the site.
You could try suggesting your idea, if there is a place to do that. Personally, I just don't mind it happening.
3219437Well, the author would undoubtedly feel better knowing down votes were given by trolls because then they'd feel better about the quality of their story.
3219652
True enough. I guess it'd be nice enough to have a feature like that.
hmmm lets see.
luna? check
unrepentant smut? also check
eyeballs sweating? well ill be damned check
good show gypsy
3214699
HOT FOR TEACHER! SHE'S HOT FOR TEACHER! shit...
3267318 Wut.
3267989
Just something for you to know: DAT STORY, is Rule 34, this pic has NOTHING to do with the story, BUT it has to do with the Rule 34
3267995 And how are these things interrelated?
3268233
Didja SAW the picture?
3268248 I am unable to comprehend the connections between my original comment, your original comment on my comment and that picture featuring Braeburn and Rainbow Dash.
Please explain in correct English or I might start talking in Spanish.
3269148
Is that I am Brazilian... That's why you almost can't understand Discord
3269148
P.S: That image is the actual cover Image of THIS story:
Braeburn tastes the Rainbow (Dash)
3270885
IM HERE AND AT ANOTHER STORY AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
3270978
You crazy...
3270985
I know
3270876>>3270885 Claro, así ¿debería yo ayudarte si yo escribir en español?
And no one can understand Discord, if someone did understand then that would ruin the whole point of it being Discord. Though, I can't see how you being Brazilian could affect me understanding Discord. Unless of course writing in English is not your favoured method of writing as I can see many mistakes in punctuation and grammar alone. If you had said, "It is because I am Brazilian... That is why you are having trouble understanding, Discord," confusion can be avoided.
Though, I am one to regal in confusion, that's for sure. It is quite hard to get the true essence and beauty of confusion across between languages without the barrier itself getting in the way, either adding to or stopping the confusion completely.
Still, I don't understand your thought process behind your original comment. Oh well. Who cares?
It really is strange, but I guess that is why I am called Discorded Q. So, have at ye, ya scurvy dog.
It was adequent at best I would say. Though the comments here seem to have gotten off track. If this were to become a series you would need a prelude to explain this whole situation. Also the situation isn't very believable. It almost seems like a bad start just to usher in sex. I do have to give you props though a very creative way to have sex. Over all not bad for a basic one-shot clop. Overall I'll give you an up vote but no favoriting. Keep up the good work.
3271036
1. Write what you said from Spanish to English
2. Is because, even if I am good on English, there are still some mistakes I make, like saying "Contrary" instead of "Opposite", got it?
3. Everybody can't Understand Discord? Is it on "The Return of Harmony"?
3275877
1. If you can't understand it then evidently it didn't help you and thus, didn't work.
2.
Contrary instead of opposite in what context? They are pretty much the same word.
"She had ideas contrary to mine. She had ideas opposite to mine."
"Contrary to popular belief, I know a few things... Opposite to popular belief, I know a few things..."
So that isn't really a mistake so no, I don't get it.
3. Nobody can understand Discord as an idea, not a character. Discord by any sense, is literally 'change', be it over time, instantly, or even constant. Change could be anything and anywhere. However, Discord isn't only change, it is chaos, anarchy, destruction, raising, anything bad really.
3278051
1. Right... thanks
2. Good english class! Thank you!
3. Oh, that explains...
I ain't even touching myself and I'm feeling strong pulses of pleasure. Nicely done.
3315610
Here here!
Luna is down right hot; well done capturing her awesomeness.
wtf i didn't read this fic already? better get on it though....
pfft that's it? i can beat luna in 3 moves flat.....
4538056 me to, the moves are: crush the chessboard with my fist, tackle her and then punch her right into the kisser before she can react, three moves, instant KO
4542828 .....
...I think I'm on fire right now just from reading the great story good job.
4542828 LOL