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carnivale


mostly insane.

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An innocent game of hide-n-seek proves to the ponies that something more frightening is at play at Sugarcube Corner...

And that involves being trapped in a closet by supernatural forces. Will they get out alive, or will they have to resign their fate to the ghostie who's doing all those nasty things to them?

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Not too bad, really.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Ever thought that whoever it was got taken with the door and through the wall?

3203727 Thanks. It was more of a practice run. I haven't written in a while, so. I know it's secretly bad :twilightsheepish:

I liked this. Just a nice little funny, slightly creepy one-shot. Rarity being vulgar was a nice a touch.

The end freaked me out so bad, then I heard something knocking :twilightoops::fluttershbad::fluttercry::raritycry:

Tried to identify the eyes. Failed at the part with the 3 blue eyes...
Never mind managed to identify which eyes is which now

3204043 That's possible. I was expecting someone like The Cakes to open the closet and ask "What are you all doing in there?". :rainbowlaugh: But whoever it is will come out eventually, right? :twilightoops:

Good. Not what I was expecting, but what I was expecting was...
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So yeah, you don't lose points for not going there.

We'd be glad if more of this such contents is made. :ajsmug:

Discord... :facehoof:

*Dark Tag*
*Story is about main six trapped in closet*
*Picture shows them in near complete darkness*

I laughed too hard at that. Now to begin reading.

Oh. My. Celestia. This was so great, I- I just can't even- just yes. So. Much. YES. Faved!

3208010 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

3211883 Thank you :pinkiesmile: I'm glad you liked it!

3209406 Glad you got the joke :ajsmug::raritywink:

Remind me never to ever again read a fic labeled " Dark" at night in bed under the covers.

This story is fine for what it is, but I just couldn't get over one constantly repeated thought in the back of my head the whole time reading this:

Twilight...
You. Can. TELEPORT! :flutterrage:

Comment posted by V8 deleted Apr 30th, 2020
V8

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Eyes glow in the dark cliche

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