• Member Since 9th Oct, 2012
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Shadowstalker


Male. Young adult. Brony. Favorite pony, Luna. Favorite villian, Discord.

Comments ( 48 )

Grown? Don't you mean ground?

, a lycan is sent below grown,

Thats not what that means. Ground.

3206037>>3206040 I fixed it. But thank you for pointing that out.

3206047 That was a rather silly mistake, albeit minor. Also, You should make a story out of this.

3206105 I might... How does a were-changeling sound? Or, maybe a lycan-ling?

3206110 The second one is sexy.

Very hot. Yes, there's spelling and a few grammar issues, but still very hot.

I could see this becoming a great 'multi-chapter' story. :pinkiehappy:

Well. When I saw your topic post in the WolfPack group I didn't think this would be out today. Also, that was very hot. Extremely so. I hope you continue this.

That Lycan better be human, or you're getting a downvote, my good sir.

3207678 It is. What other ones do you know that stand on two legs?

3207470>>3207505 I completely agree with these two PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!

Random idea or not it has great potential.

3207913 Well, people don't seem to realize that 'were' (wer) means 'man'.

very good please make a series out of this

You got over 100 likes! This calls for continuation!

Hope you continue this!

Sir, you had my curiosity, but now you have my attention.

Please continue :pinkiehappy:

flames that were being relight in her nethers.

*relit

Please continue I find this interesting.

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were means man, so since it's a werewolf it has to be a human. :eeyup:

3210881 You say that, but you have no fucking clue how many ignorant fucks there are on this site that can't be assed to learn that shit. :rainbowlaugh:

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ignorantiam parit ignorantiae :facehoof:

Interesting mix, but there isn't enough back story to really hold it together. Also, it needs a pre-reader.

10/10 for erotic content. Backstory would be nice, but it could also muck it up. As it is, there's just enough here to give the setting credibility, which is perfectly fine, and more than enough for a like and a fav. Good stuff, sir, good stuff.

Odd mix; I APPROVE THIS RANDOM CLOPFIC!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

I like the story... any chance there could be a continuation of it? :pinkiehappy:

To be fair in a world where the dominant species is equine, "were" may mean "pony" instead of "human". OR you can take it as "human" in the sentient being definition. But seriously, werewolf is kind of its own word now, separate from its parent words. Also, WHAT did I just read! :pinkiegasp: I was pretty good though...

I can't even here myself think!

Hear*

Wrapping its furry fingers around her waste,

Waist*

Other than that, I'd go back through some of your longer sentences and try to improve readability. Good job on everything else, though.

Werewolves and changelings, two of my favourite things. Turned out a lot sexier than I expected, too! Please do continue, or maybe make a spinoff.

this is.. really freaking good i like it, this is the kinda clop we need lol nice visuals in thier :pinkiehappy:

Hell yes~! this was absolutely amazing clop, you must do a sequel, or add more chapters.

That was good, random and bucking hot!:pinkiegasp:
Now I got the urge to Skyrim and go on a Werewolf rampage. Excuse me.:pinkiecrazy:

I don't care if you clop or ship this, CONTINUE!

This would be an AMAZING story to continue! Please continue it!

You know what I see? An adventure story. Yez if you continue thiz I can definitely see that, or if you make a sequel that uses this story for your clop, like winds of change does. But please, by all means continue

Good sir, I beg of you! It must continue!

Very skyrim-esqe... I approve.

My god, this is wonderful. :pinkiecrazy:

Hawt, kinda was hoping you'd include knotting but whatever.

Very good job friend! Other than very few spelling errors, this was really goddamned good. :twilightsmile: In the words of one of my friends 'Eleven out of Ten, would fap to again'. Though, I guess it's clop now, isn't it? :rainbowhuh:

Either way, if you will excuse me, I just got the urge to Skyrim and go on a Werewolf rampage. :pinkiecrazy:

3207913 you should make another chapter due to popular demand! XD

3206110 I like the sound of lycan-ling, it's got a nice ring to it

Smexeh.

Cya
Raziel-chan

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Wrapping its furry fingers around her waste,

holy shit! pun intended.

6209532 this totally needs a sequel with lycan-lings

7319246 yup definitely needs a sequel

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