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Spike X female Daimond Dog story?
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It was VV's request and I, too, loved the idea.
3082984 ....I like.
But why does it seem anthro?
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Because Diamond Dogs and Spike-type dragons are bipedal. But Rarity is clearly a quadroped.
It seems everyone is doing brand new spike ships; first a spitfire one, now this.
3083087 Once again we meet.
What are the odds.
3083096 Because Spike is awesome, and when there is a brand new Spike story; we hop on it.
3083134 Likewise.
Epic High Five.
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In my normal stories Spike is a player seeking out his perfect pony. He has a group of guys to give him advice.
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Oh if you read it you will see that while there is some heartache it is because of how Spike acts and he actually ends up extremely happy.
Considering that Spike is quite unique, character wise, it lets you write a lot of different situations for him. This one is a good, neigh perfect example.
3083134>>3083096 both of you I agree with for I Blaze whish to join this club od dragon followers
3083068 I see. Thank you.
3083638 Welcome aboard.
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This story… is so beautiful. I am literally tearing up. you , my friend, have provided the world with a wonderouse creation a nd you should be proud.
3083638 welcome to the hoard.
3083754 no a bunch of dragons are called a thunder
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My thanks
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Awww, good of you to say. Thank you much.
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It seems a bit much but the reward is certainly more than what he suffers.
3083763 thanks for telling me.
3083096 .... My profile pic is better
Whority was still a cunt. The entire time Spike had been in Ponyville Rarity never had any intention of being with Spike yet she never said anything cause she was trying to find a nice way to tell him he never had a chance to begin with while still getting free labor out of him?
There a literally no,words to describe how beautifully done this was.
Have a like,fav,follow and 20/10 Pinkies
3084288 I find you statement... Illogical.
3084754 I find your lack of minislaves......illogical.
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That is a large number of Pinkies
Excellent!
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She never asked, he donated. Really that made telling him harder. Free labor piled up. Plus for some portion of that she really was either clueless or under the assumption he was a little kid crushing on his sister's friend. When his earnestness became real to her she was rather torn. Her grown up mind had been open and seeking which explains Obelisk. She needed a grown up. And they had way more in common.
didn't like this at all. Mostly because of the rarity you used. Which was bitch and whore rarity.
i wish spike didn't show up to the wedding, got pissed and left. but hey w/e.
im out.
3085137 Still stand by my cunt comment. Even when she knew Spike really loved her she just said nothing and continued to fuck Obelisk.
3085137 I agree with you.
3084787 I am the sole guardian of Cybertron.
I'll charge you with insubordination, I'm contacting Megatron.
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Well... that shows a low emotional maturity level. Rarity wanted Spike to be happy, Spike was happy and had his head back together. He wanted to go to that wedding and liked how things went.
Life isn't perfect, and our emotions get battered. The mature folks, the smart and stable folks, the kind that make something of themselves learn to deal with a life that is bumpy and see when someone is dicking them intentionally and when life just happen that way.
It was adequate if I would give it anything. I would say the characterizing failed at much, but with the "alternate universe" tag, the characterization can be manipulated to however the author deems necessary to facilitate the idea presented. Regardless, a fair read at least. Not something I would read again nor would recommend, but not something I would advise people to avoid.
I would critique more, but the gist I would imagine has already been said.
3085265 One does not simply CONTACT Megatron. There are proper channel to go through, as well as a long and arduous adventure.
3087319 It took 4 million years to get through to him.
Rarity's a slut. Yeah, fuck you Whority
well, that was a awesome story, any chances of seeing more to it?
that was cool, recon it needs a sequel thing
The only issue that I have with this is that the paragraphs weren't separated well; you could have put in an extra line of space in between to make them much easier to read. Other than that, I got no problem with this plot~
Haven't read it yet - but you reminded me that I owe Victoria Viper a story myself.
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I hadn't even thought about a sequel. I'm not even sure what it would be about. Though on reflection I do love these characters and would love to see them doing something again.
I love this.
Also, who drew the diamond dog to the left?
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SSSonic2 on FurAffinity. He has a Tumblr but I forget what it's called. I think the link is on the front page. You can't see the FA image unless you're registered.
does it make me a bad person to HATE pony and diamond dog relationships?
but aside from my subconscious racism (speciesism?) it is a good story and executed well
very unusual pairing but makes for one very interesting story
Er, I don't think so. I was under the impression that Obelisk was not Aventurine's ex but a different dog all together. Of course technically, even if he was her ex, Spike still isn't cuckolding him as they would still have to be in a relationship. As it is, Aventurine isn't in a relationship with anyone (at that point).
If Spike was cuckolding Obelisk, he would be doing Rarity not Aventurine.
Blue? Spike's not blue ... he's purple/green. Unless he changed color and I missed it. Also, a few mis-capitalized letters here and there.
Uhm ... yeah. I dunno, it was a thing. A shipping I haven't seen before.