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Gabriel LaVedier
Just another University-edicated fanfiction writer who prefers the cheers and laughter of ponies to madness and sorrow.
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Long time without seeing anything from you, my friend. I actually really liked Daring Done, so I'll give this one a quick r&r for you when I have time.
“Your wager was too common,” Ahuizotl said with a proud puff of his chest. “You considered the average stallion con sus pajaritos pequeños y sus huevos minúsculos. That is an insult to you, Miss Do. They they had you while offering so little makes me want to go back and slap them all!”
What the hell was this gibberish he was talking? Did he make up some strange language, or is this a real form of dialect, and if so, what does it mean?
By the way, next time, I will remember to actually scroll down further the page to check tags in the future before diving nose-first into a story. That sounds wrong to me for some reason, but whatever.
We need more Ahuizodl/Daring Do shipfics
They are kind of an exotic and refreshing pair. After Discord he is the only one to be part of crosspecies shipfics
4565961 I haven't read the story yet, but I will answer your question:
That's an euphenism and it means: "with their small penis and even smaller testicles" in that order. Latinamerica spanish!
now to read this
4566118 I regret asking.
I bet that if Rainbow says something nopony will believe her (even less Twilight). And that'a my petition for made a sequel of this one!!!! Focusing in Daring and Ahuizotl, of course!
Excellent work, as always, the pacing, the feels and the euphenims were correctly. When you wrote "cula", were you refering to: being scaried or the anatomy one, that tips me off.
very good, very good. this is going to favs!
Extra: I love the picture!
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Thank you very much! I look forward to that.
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I've rapidly come to enjoy Daring and Ahuizotl. They're spicy and sexy together.
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Thank you for explaining! And confirming it was understandable.
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The anatomy one. I like to think Ahuizotl uses Spanish for insults, dirty talk, or when he's pleasure-drunk.
A sequel? What would be in that?
And yes, the picture was shown to me by Bronystories. He really knows my taste.
4566336 It will be some sort of letter from RD, she explained what happen in the world after she desapair (the author of the books). Daring and Ahuizotl can have sex (whatever kink you want),and mostly explaing that RD is the only contact to the world they want to have... or something like that. even a hint of nopony of the mane 6 belive Dash when she try to tell them, which they find funny.
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Sounds like an amusing thing. They could be making love while reading the letter Dash wrote them. I'll consider it.
"That only happens in fanfics!"
Ah now i have read this i have to be honest, this might be the one of the best written clopfics. It had everything, some kinky stuff that felt genuine for Daring Do personality,nothing over the top, dialogs in character(i could even hear every sentence in Ahuizodl latino voice), very good description to really get in the mood and the most enjoable things of all - Passion! Most clopfics feel like generic porn but here i could sense their love to eachother in every scene and with every teasing sentence which really add more than simple describing of genitalia. Im giving it 10 thumbs up
Now beside fluttercord i will look forward for every other Ahuizodl/Daring Do fanfiction out here and i hope you write more
I don't speak Spanish, and even I could tell what he was saying
This was exquisite. When I saw their first episode I thought "Oh god, the fanfics between these two are going to be awful." And you proved me deliciously, wonderfully wrong. This is how play-rape is supposed to be written. Her pregnancy was interesting but not overdone, and the differences in their dialects played perfectly off each other.
I would fave this, but my ancient computer won't let me.
I'll bookmark it, and fave it once a generous friend allows me to use theirs. In the meantime, have an upvote.
This was an excellent clopfic and helps to showcase your evolution as a writer.
I'm a sucker for rape fantasy, so I particularly enjoyed their discussion pertaining to ravishment. I almost wished that Ahuizotl's limbs and tail had been restrained. It felt awkward when he repeatedly yearned to hold her, but resisted. If he had been unable to reach for his love due to restraints, i would've had more of an impact for me.
It's not often we see a pregnant mare be the dominating force in a rape fantasy. I would've liked it if there had been more talking to the unborn baby. Have the mother and father expressing love towards their child while engaging in a similar act which led to its creation.
Rainbow Dash as voyeur was a welcome surprise. I hope to see her become involved in the next chapter.
What I love about your stories is that there's more to them than mere titillation. You offer engaging characters with heartfelt motivations. You sometimes go out of your way to ensure that everything is safe, when a little ambiguity would be preferred. I know that's just the kind of person you are.
I look forward to reading and editing many more like it. Kudos!
That horrified face tho.
If I remember correctly, you commented about something like this in one of Bronystories' blogs. Glad to see you managed to work this out. Looking forward to reading it.
No, you fool! The sequel must have the cute hybrid baby!
Yeah, he knows what's going on.
4568968 Your picture, is me waiting for the sequel.
Hah! I figured eventually this picture would end up becoming a sequel to the prior story! Good show!
Let me just be the first to say congrats on getting the feature, this story totally deserves it.
I really enjoyed the story. I found it funny where it wants to be, erotic where it needs to be, with just the right amout of silliness expected for this particular paring.
The only thing I found wrong with this story is a couple typos I noticed as I was reading it.
I would venture a guess to say that you meant to say "This belongs to me" here. There was one other typo I noticed earlier in the fic, but I was unable to find it.
Regardless of errors, this is a great fic that handles clop in a very unusal way, but not any less enjoyable. I do personally prefer the clop that has actual feelings and emotions behind it, rather than just sex for the sake of sex.
The one thing that did kinda irk me story-wise, is the fact that Daring had vaginal sex with Ahuizotl while pregnant... Now apparently, this can actually cause harm to the un-born fetus, particularly in the later stages of development, as was hinted is the case in this fic.
I probably would have preferred it if it were anal sex, rather than vaginal, or even oral... But it is what it is, and it's still really enjoyable.
Overall, I give this story
.5/10
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I am not ashamed of self-referential humor. That was thrown in as a treat for my fellow writers and readers.
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I find that some stories come easier if there is a "hook" of some kind that engages my mind. For this it was the nature of their relationship (adversarial turned romantic) and Ahuizotl's Latin suavity that made his dialogue more fun to write. It made the passion easier to do too.
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High praise indeed from you! It's wonderful that you enjoyed this and that you think I hit the elements right. I tried to balance all the parts so that I created a properly harmonious story. Hearing I did warms my heart.
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I don't say this often, mostly because I feel it's a little cheesy, but you are one of the writers to whom I look up. I treasure your advice and seek your help because I think you have important things to say. When someone like you tells me "You did a good job" it warms my heart and fills my writing tank with inspiration. After the middlin' week I had it's a breath of fresh air.
You taught me, even with stories I didn't enjoy. 40 Day Cruise, Odd Jobs, Expecting Exile, even Slobberjobs and Tight Knight, all enjoyable. The others still taught a lesson. You write with bold ailithenticity. What you make is you splashed across the page. You pour out passion and that inspired me. I was myself here, as ever.
That may be why Ahuizotl wasn't staked down. Besides saving on time, it's a sign. He promised he would follow through on the fantasy. He wanted to hold her but his committment, his honor, was strong. It even lasted through being pleasure-drunk.
But you're right. I missed a golden opportunity. Talking to the baby would have been perfect. I remember how much it moved me when Pinkie did it.
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I wish I could go. So many nice folks manage to make it out. Being an old hand at conventions I would love to experience a new genre of one (though Furry conventions have become Brony-friendly so there may not be much difference.)
Thanks for looking in.
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I am now actively considering a sequel. And of course, have the hybrid baby. There's a picture whose link I don't have, but I know it's by Kloudmutt, and it shows Daring giving birth to a little Ahuizotl baby.
I'm just glad nobody's around...
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Thank you for your very kind words and the correction. I should get to that next week. The hassles of no home Internet on my writing computer. I do most of these replies on my phone.
A minor Pontiac on vaginal sex: I consider myself fairly atypical. And I mean that in the sense that I'm not big on some trends. As you noted there is passion here, and feelings. But this also applies to acts. Anal (and oral) seem to be overpoweringly common. Anal especially. Vaginal seems left by the wayside. So I do it as much as possible. The delicious side-effect of this is impreg. So it's win/win.
Once more, glad you enjoyed it! It's great to hear from people who like what I like.
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Just Daring, her sorta husband (well, babydaddy) and her creepy, creepy number one fan hiding in the bushes watching them have preggo sex.
... I kinda wanna see this threesome.
Dash and Daring more than just look alike. Dash, I think, would hear the explanation and decide that if they want to keep her quiet - she'll need some incentive. Naturally in my mind, that incentive is probably getting it on with her idol - and competitive, in seeing if she can resist a screwing so good that even Daring gave up for it. Perfect mixture for a threesome.
4565961 it's not some strange dialect it's japanse you moron
4571472 Woah! Woah, woah, woah! WHERE the hell did THAT attitude come from ,man? I apologize if I was supposed to know what it was, but damn son! There was no need for name calling, you stupid poopy head! XD
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That ending.
4571526 Just to clarify, I wasn't hating on his story, okay? I just didn't have a clue what Ahuizotl was saying. I honestly didn't mean to cause trouble, I guess I might have not properly typed my comment to show that. I don't speak Japanese, after all! Don't hate on me!
4571533 there there
it's all okay
just as long as you understand completely that it's japanse and only japanese
4571543 Who the hell down-thumbed you for saying that? Why did someone down-thumb you for saying - ugh, doesn't matter.
Anyway, thanks mate. Honestly, i really am sorry for not knowing it was Japanese, but in my defense, Japanese isn't something that I usually see written in English, just in its own symbols and stuff, you now? So honestly, I didn't recognize it.
I'm not going to be hated for not recognizing a language here, am I?
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+4000 internet points. Oh my God.
4571576 I'm physically in tears from laughing so hard help
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No one can save you.
4571579 Te amo, Regi-san~
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4571593 hey now I don't understand your freaky tentacle language I can only recognize it
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I think you'll be juuuuuust fine.
~Skeeter The Lurker
4571603 Hey, haven't I seen your name pop up in other stories before? Sorry to be bugging you like a gnat here, but your name seems...familiar.
Are you that guy who's 'famous' just for commenting on every story that comes out or something? Or are you someone different than that?
4571603 I'm not offending you at all am I? As I have said before I'm not here to cause trouble