My name is Frostbite. I’m a detective in Manehattan. I was married to the most beautiful mare in the world, Jetset. She was an actress with quite a reputation. We had a colt, who we named Looking Glass. He was great at finding things. Keys, socks, spare ink…anything and everything. Hell, I bet he could have found Celestia’s parents, wherever they ran off to.
But now he can’t find things, and my wife can’t act anymore.
When everything Frostbite loves is taken from him, he will get revenge, no matter what.
Chapters (3)
I am having a moment right now
3182034 I teared up while writing it.
here's a funny pic for no fucking reason
31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m7hhmlXp1j1qgvfs8o1_500.jpg p.s i'm so bored
3196076 Should I be taking this as a compliment, or...?
3196359 oh no you're story is good so far
i'm bored please help me
3198291 Have a Flash game!
http://futzi01.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-Wing-388160856
It's a little game where you fly around as Twilight and shoot shapes and upgrade her powers. It's a nice time-waster.
3202760 thank's
Nothing is worse than a lover who has lost everything. Inb4 epic bloodbath.
Prolly could have done without the deus ex machina there in the middle, though.
3213173 I know it's more of a last-stand kind of thing, but deus ex machina is one of my favorite literary devices of all time because it is the ultimate loop-thrower, in my opinion.
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Yeah, but it kindof feels like cheating.
3215918
Yeah, but it kindof feels like cheating.
3215935 I suppose one could argue that point, but Celestia's intervention plays an important part in the story. It'll all come to light eventually.
New cover art! Yay! Found it on Google Images. I think it really captures how Manehattan is about to get a whole lot darker and rainier, as well as more ambiguous themes, like sadness, depression, and loss.
Interesting story, but the tempo of the story feels like it's in fast forward
3450079 It's one of my earlier ones, and I was inexperienced. In future chapters, I'm gonna slow it down a bit. Glad you liked it!