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Elric of Melnipony


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A cutie mark appears on a pony's flank when he or she finds that certain something that makes them different from every other pony. - Miss Cheerilee

While there may be some fillies out there crusading for cutie marks on what seems to be a daily basis, several of their classmates have already had theirs appear. Haven't you always wanted to find out how it happened? Of course you have.

(The colt characters don't really interest me; sorry, colt fans.)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 84 )

Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are awesome.
Chapter for them, please!

I'd request a story for Dinky, but she seems to have Schrödinger's butt tattoo... when she even has one.

In any case, I'm loving this thus far. Definitely looking forward to more.

Also:

This is Pinkie Pie from R&D. It's probably best if you don't ask her anything about what she does here.

"Speaking frankly, I don't understand half of what those ponies are talking about. Speaking Pinkily, I've always wondered what was going through the mind of the pony who discovered cinnamon."

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Glad you're enjoying it! Noi (the filly in the princess costume on Nightmare Night) is another one I won't be able to include, since she's had around half a dozen cutie marks.

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I wonder if anyone's done a story about Spastic Cutie Mark Syndrome? Or, you know, a name for it that sucks less. :derpytongue2:

keep up the good work, i can't wait to see Silver Spoons chapter

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: I've seen a few stories that explain her cutie mark, so coming up with a new take on it will be something of a challenge.

Hehehehe Peachjack

Also, good use of the word 'pronked'. :twilightsmile:

I love this. I don't really know any of the Ponyville fillies by name, other than Archer, but that's basically because she looks like Scootaloo, heheh. So a Spoon and Tiara chapter(Or one for each if you're feeling mighty adventurous and creative) would be great!

I must say, you captured Pinkie Pie very well. She's random, but not "dumb" random. She probably had Peachy make those items because she knew that it was her special talent.

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Thank you. :pinkiesmile: Learned that one on Derpibooru; they have a "pronking" tag.

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I really appreciate what you said about Pinkie. I wanted to portray her as a little odd, but not bizarre. I wanted to hint that she knew more than she let on about what was going on, but wasn't all-seeing. It was important to me to get the character right.

This is Peachy Pie:
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She and the filly in the cover image were in the talent show together, reciting a poem on roller skates. :twistnerd:

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I'll take that as a compliment. :yay:

This fanfic never tells me when there's an update, I always have to check for myself, which is odd.

I like how the cutie mark previous stories you've written so far tied into this one! And also, the ponified names for the weekdays. Genius.

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Thank you very much! :pinkiehappy:
Yeah, I wanted to try to tie things together. And the days of the week were much more difficult than I expected them to be, so I'm glad someone noticed that detail.

Ok. This is quite good so far.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Haha, how cute.

These really aren't bad at all.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Hehe, very nice in this.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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They are quite good. Quick little standalone SoL bits.

Nice way to start the day, to be sure.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Thank you. :pinkiesmile:
If you like what you're reading, tell your friends! :scootangel:

And if you hate what you're reading, tell your enemies! :derpytongue2:

Interresting littles stories, I like them.

Another excellent chapter. keep up the awesome work.

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I'm glad that you do. :pinkiesmile:

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Thank you! :yay: So kind of you to say so.

Huh. And here I named her parents Spiral Fracture and Emily White Shyamenthol...

In any case, it's kind of a shame Mr. Criollo can't do this for the Crusaders. But then, what fun would that be?

I like it. Awesome use of OC :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you, gracias, merci, grazie, danke, arigato, et cetera. :twilightsmile:

Very cute, gonna follow and see how this all plays out. Thumbs up for when it's done :twilightsheepish:

Hey, ya said ya wanted a review.
:ajsmug:
This story is freaking adorable! Feeling down? Read this. Well written and possibly cannon to boot.
Favorite Line: Couldn't really pick one, this whole story is cute!
Rating::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/5
Final Verdict: :rainbowhuh:........................................:ajbemused:.........................................:trixieshiftleft:............................................God that's cute.

Thanks so much! :yay:
Side note: when I finished reading your story, I added it to a few more groups. If you're able to return the favor, I would be grateful.
:pinkiesmile:

it wasn't bad, I liked it, good job.

Can I just say that I love your author notes, and this collection?

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Say it as much as you like! :trollestia: Thank you for the kind words, and I'm even more grateful for the confirmation that someone does, in fact, actually read those notes.:twilightsmile:

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I especially liked the details on Twist's dad.

This story has so many happies! I'm loving it.

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I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :yay: And while I've been side-tracked with other things (editing, other attempts at writing, and so on), I promise there will be more chapters.

Hi! I'm here on behalf of the Good Grammar Directory. Your story has been approved and added to our folders. :)

Hmm, hadn't spotted this before, to the top of the pile.:eeyup:

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Still trying to pin down some ideas, and life gets in the way of writing, but yes, I plan to continue. :twilightsmile:

Pretty cool (and cute) series. Here's to hoping we see more of it in the near future.

Naming herself a highly influential leader... Makes Sense! :pinkiehappy:

Nice chapter!

Also, Cheerilee is a corrupt government official.

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I thought so! And in discussions I've had with Arcum42, we've agreed it makes sense that ponies would sometimes change their names after getting their cutie marks.

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Thank you! And she feels really bad about it, if that helps. :trollestia:

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:yay:

4019363 Hey, she's a teacher, at least 35 in human years, and she's corrupt. That's at least an 8.5 on the hot scale.:raritywink:

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