A modern Equestria is faced with problems both inside and outside the country, namely an upstart warlord, a plot against the Elements, and a rapidly changing social climate.
But Fluttershy, promise me...promise us that you'll only use The Stare when you really have to."
When someone says something like this, you know what will happen next... So far, a very interesting story, something I'd like to read in one go and wait patiently for the next chapter ;)
Very nice, very nice. There was a lot more scenery, good foreshadowing for backstories. I like it. Next chapter!
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Thanks! Chapter two's coming as soon as my pre-reader can confirm that it's publishable. It's going to have a lot of exciting stuff, I think.
Okay, this story has my attention. Faved and liked! Will read further!
When someone says something like this, you know what will happen next...
So far, a very interesting story, something I'd like to read in one go and wait patiently for the next chapter ;)
Merciful emperor.... Poor Fluttershy...