A modern Equestria is faced with problems both inside and outside the country, namely an upstart warlord, a plot against the Elements, and a rapidly changing social climate.
On another note, I hadn't meant it to be a jab at the Elements and they will be playing a large role other than 'fix this' later on in the story. It will involve explosions ;)
Also, the 1.29cm was actually a math error on my part, converting .5" to cm manually while sleep deprived played a part. Thanks for the head's up!
Dazzling high octane battle sequences and lovely plot progression = win.
I especially love how you deconstructed Equestria's pacifism and the subtle jab at the Elements of Harmony.
One really tiny thing:
Most of the time, calibers are given in millimeters, not centimeters.
And 12.9 mm sounds like a really odd caliber to use...unless the rest of the forces are using the same caliber.
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Thanks! I aim to please, and I'm glad it's win.
On another note, I hadn't meant it to be a jab at the Elements and they will be playing a large role other than 'fix this' later on in the story. It will involve explosions ;)
Also, the 1.29cm was actually a math error on my part, converting .5" to cm manually while sleep deprived played a part. Thanks for the head's up!
So it was Blueblood.... May the warp take him......