Some time after Emily is firmly on the throne, Corvo is contacted by the Outsider once more... And sent on a mission to save a reality...
Of talking ponies?!
But was he the only one sent to Equestria?
I found the cover image on the Internet, I claim no ownership of the image or of the Dishonored or MLP franchises.
Image by vicious-mongrel on Deviantart
WARNING MAJOR SPOILERS FOR DISHONORED 1 AND ASSOCIATED DLC
Contains strong language
Rated Teen due to adult language and adult boo-boos
UNDERGOING REWRITE
good no mistakes no obvious plot holes {that I saw} good job
two mistakes this time
he would not know what that is
two
it would be tripled blink
or triple blink
but otherwise good job
So, low chaos?
You sir earned a favorite.... For now..
*see's dishonored pic*...
So far good job.
Lol that ending!
I was waiting for more Dishonored stuff :3
3220063 yep
3221129 fellow dan bull fan
'Sup?
3219854thank you I'll fix that
3223178
Woooooo.
That is the best ending.
... You need to fix the grammatical, syntax, and spelling errors....otherwise...Well, you have a good venture here, I'd hate to see this disappear.
3225366dont worry it won't, but can point out some of my errors?
3227920 Send me a P.M. and the story. I'll correct them. Besides, you look like you need the help. I mean, just posting a reply and you make errors.
3228029
I do apologise for errors but I'm typing this in an iPad
It appears to be Latin....If it is im calling you out on being somewhat unoriginal...Though admittedly i havent seen how this will play out in full and as such can only give a partial opinion.Either way,Still lovin' the story.Keep on Keeping on.
3228237 *Eye twitch* ...Really? Fingers are misfiring? Do you have access to a library? They usually have computers.
3228280
Yeah, I know Latin isnt the most original but I wanted the words to have a similarity to English
3228237 YOU CAN DO FIM FICTIONS ON A IPAD?
3228953
You should've made it something like Chinese or Hindi. That'd be more original.
Gaelic might have been a better choice, but great story so far! Did you ever think about redoing the story in a dark ending setting? After your done with this of course.
3229542
Euyup
3231371
Perhaps, I've never really liked that ending, it portrays Corvo less as a father figure and more someone Emily would see in her nightmares
3233822 K Den
I THIS STORY MAKE MORE IF NOT YOU WILL MAKE ME MEOW iambrony.steeph.tp-radio.de/mlp/gif/353227__safe_rarity_animated_image%2Bmacro_reaction%2Bimage_angry_vibrating.gif
Corvo is gollum now?...
3314781have you actually played dishonored?
3314804 Yes,Yes i have,High chaos,No kills,Because i can
3314806
...Do you remember who says that?
3314804 My low chaos,No kills run is kinda on hold due to lack of intrest
3314808 Ima go out on a limb and say either one of Daud's guys or granny rags...
3314812
Finally got it!!!
3314815 Give me a break,Its been a month or two since i last touched dishonored
3314818
I apologise
We cool
3314858 Yeah,We cool
Corvo is now Slender-vo.
So good!Can't wait for the next chapter!
GRANNY RAGS YAY!
And so it thickens.
The plot, or your gumbo.
Both!
hmm interesting
this could be good
the bone charm is granny rag's doing i know it
Do runes corrupt?
Didn't read all the notes so maybe I missed that.
3348724
I do mean to purposely switch perspective but when did I switch tense?
3352271i will edit this at the weekend thank you for bringing it to my attention
Are you going to add some character tags?
So we will know the main characters of this story.
3352486
Oh yes thank you for reminding me
Don't wanna sound impatient but WHY U NO UPDATE???!!!