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Mossbender


An artist in training, a writer, a Canadian, and a friend to all.

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(Note: This story takes place after Season 4 and before Season 5)

At the dawn of time, there were two beings that existed in the Universe. A group known only as The Ancients and The God of Chaos himself, he who existed long before the time of Discord.

As much as they despised each other, The Ancients and The God of Chaos worked together to keep balance in the Universe. The Ancients were in charge of Harmony and The God of Chaos was in charge of maintaining the chaotic energies that flowed within the Universe. For a long time, there was peace, but alas, peace does not last forever.

The God of Chaos grew jealous of Harmony. He despised how everything thought of it as perfection, that Harmony was the only element that held everything together, while chaos was shunned and feared. So The God of Chaos sought out to disrupt this balance, proclaiming himself as The Endbringer and annihilating entire planets with his power, power that he was supposed to contain and distribute only when necessary. He felt no remorse. He gave no mercy. It was only chaos.

So began the age of his Reign of Chaos and the war that would last between The God of Chaos and The Ancients for centuries... until The Ancients stumbled upon a world that would determine the fate of the Universe...


Year 652 E

It is a sad day in Equestria. The well-respected wizard Star Swirl the Bearded, known for his feats towards the end of the Chaos War and his studies in the arcane arts, has passed away. The princesses told me that it was due to unknown circumstances, but they refused to comment any further.

Star Swirl was a good friend of mine. He was short-tempered at times, but he always meant well. It's unfortunate that he'll never be able to finish his spell, his final 'masterpiece' as he called it. The princesses have taken all of his notes for safekeeping, although I do not know what they'll use it for.

Before he passed away, Star Swirl locked himself away in his tower for extended periods at a time. He kept mumbling something about a... a seventh element. He must have been referring to the Elements of Harmony, but that's just ludicrous. There were only six elements used to defeat Discord, not seven. You can rest easy now though old friend.

The funeral is tomorrow at sunset, although I do not know why the preparations are taking so long. Nevertheless, I am expecting a huge turn out tomorrow. He has helped the lives of many.

-Scribble Pen, Scholar of Lore


Equestria: Present Time

It had been only a few days since Twilight's triumph over Tirek when Equestria had fallen prey to yet another evil, except at the time, nopony had suspected anything was amiss. When reports of unnatural occurrences began to arise, ranging from disappearances to shadowy demons, the princesses, Luna, Celestia, Cadance, and Twilight assembled small teams to confront these issues, only to have them return with nothing.

Taking matters into their own hooves, Celestia and Luna sought out these problems themselves and were successfully able to bring peace to their citizens, although they too were unsuccessful in finding the source of these problems.

One day, Twilight came across an ancient prophecy in a book given to her by Celestia that foretold the coming of something strange. This being would be able to help them in their time of need, but there was a chance that it would destroy Equestria as they know it. With no other options available, Twilight set out to learn how she could bring this One to Equestria, which brings us to the beginning of our tale.

Join Twilight and her friends as they set out on an epic quest to defeat this darkness, alongside an unlikely hero of another world who has yet to become aware of the true power lying within him...

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 35 )

I'm not entirely sure... but judging by the cover art... I had the same idea, but wanted to have a bit more canon to work with... and thus would start during S5...


Reading yours though...

Seems interesting so far. Go on.

Update, after reading, I detect that the plot is probably similar, but without the 'pony-fied' human in Equestria.

Good chapter but I have ONE little problem; why didn't the Diamond Dogs take the necklace while he was UNCONSCIOUS? :facehoof:

4775079 Necklace was sealed to him, he can't take it off, nor can anyone else, not yet anyways! Dogs tried to take it while he was unconscious but couldn't, so they waited to see if he could or they would kill him as a last resort. They aren't exactly the best at coming up with plans, good question though! =)

4775168 Ah okey! :twilightsmile: Thank you for elaborating

4776090 No probs! That is my job as a storyteller after all, in fact, thank you for pointing it out for me, lets me know that I should triple check my chapters before publishing them

interesting story so far, however you really need to go over every chapter and make it to where when someone talks a new paragraph starts when another character talks.
Otherwise it gets very confusing on who is talking and it also doesn't look good because it looks like a wall of text

4808022 Thank you for bringing this up, in the beginning I had actually debated whether or not to follow the style you are describing, but if it makes the story flow better and easier to read, then I believe an update will come soon for the chapters. Thank you for your input!

Comment posted by Mossbender deleted Sep 12th, 2014

New chapter tomorrow! Would have been today but ran into some unfortunate delays.

the Stealer of Magic.

I think "the Thief of Magic." Would fit better.

4864653 That actually sounds a lot better than what I had, thanks! The change has been made

maybe just maybe i might read this but i'm not very sure



for now have a smiley ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

4888595 Thanks for the smiley! I find that the story starts off a bit slow, but by chapter four I find the quality begins to improve greatly. But the choice is yours =)

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Comment posted by Mossbender deleted May 26th, 2015

Will Discord be appearing in this story? Is he the "God of Chaos"? Will Rainbow Dash be beating anybody up in this story?

4983376 1. Yes 2. It's explained in the story 3. Of course!

Read the story and the answers shall be yours

4995131 Yeah beta, I was invited at the last minute by a couple of friends and went on Friday, I wish I could have stayed for the whole weekend though! It was definitely one of the most fun and best days I've ever had. How was your time there by the way?

Holy hay! 500+ single views on chapter one! It has been a while now but that's awesome! =D

Comment posted by Mossbender deleted May 26th, 2015
Comment posted by Mossbender deleted May 26th, 2015
Comment posted by Mossbender deleted May 26th, 2015

Interesting start so far, can't wait to see what happens next!

Twilight, stop. Just stop.
Is he actually only a unicorn or has he not seen his wings if he has any?

5253259 Hey there! It has been so long since I've written this story so let me warn you about something. At first he might seem overpowered, but it levels out as the story progresses. I find some parts to be a bit cringy, but most of the story is good. The plot may confuse you, but I've done my absolute best explaining it. To answer your question, no, he is not an Alicorn. If you continue reading and reach the later chapters, you'll find that the quality of my writing has improved greatly. After a long hiatus I'm back to working on it after practicing with other stories of mine.

tl;dr Story gets better and less cliche the longer you read it for, next chapter currently in development

To those who have followed the Elements of Chaos, I thank you. Your patience has been incredible! It might have seem like I had forgotten about this story, but I assure you, I have not. Other ideas and such came along and I just needed a break from the action. Looking at it again, I've been editing it as I see fit. I haven't changed the story, just the structure so that it'll flow better. I'm currently working on my newest story, To Walk Among Us, but I assure you, a story update will come as soon as possible! Rock on! Brony on! Stay tuned!

5631527 Bleh, good job sticking true to your word author, really pushed out another update for these kind people, didn't ya? Anyway, story is going through some minor grammar changes and sentence fluency. The next chapter WILL be released soon. This story is being finished and is now off hiatus. Also, please ignore some of deleted comments below made only by me. They served no purpose to the story and were removed. Thank you!

Celestia smiled warmly at him. "That is most splendid to hear, now Eldon- Eldon?" She looked behind her to see that he had stopped in his tracks. His mouth hung slightly open as he stared at the ponies at the round table.

When I saw this I thought of King Arthur and the knights of the round table for some reason... Brains, am I right?

who knows how long they'll need to last for?

It might be that I'm tired, but this sounded like it had a double meaning...

I did get a good laugh at thinking that that's all the guards are about though... Producing good males.

I also thought of attack on titan when he lifted the city up...

6106106 Hey there! It's always nice to see a new reader interested in one of my stories, and hopefully you are enjoying it! I apologize for the lack of updates, as I have been busy with real life shenanigans, :twilightoops: but lately I've been working on changing the sentence structure and fluency, something it really REALLY needed. It is my first story after all, so I have improved over time, or at least I hope so! :twilightsheepish: After the updates, I'll be hard at work pushing out the next chapter, as it is in its final stages now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! I love to interact with others :twilightsmile:

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