You had one mission, yet your actions lead to the purge of Planet Azeroth. You were sent to Dalaran the mage city to Deliver the Alpha codes from the herald of the titans. But disaster struck Azeroth when the codes never arrived, you were missing. No one knew where you were.
You were struggling to free yourself from the quicksand in the swamp you were helpless, your Mechanostrider already vanished from the surface. Without any means of escape you hopelessly sealed yourself deep down in the swamp.
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This is the story about you Sophia Springlock a mage of the Kirin'Tor, who is freed from your icy prison in an old Archivum deep in Canterlot mountain. You are found by Twilight Sparkle and Princess Mi'amore Cadenza. It's time for you to return the favor by saving her wedding.
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Heya guys, this story takes place in an alternate version of the original warcraft universe where the Alpha codes from the titans never arrived in Dalaran. This also takes place during the events of Season 2 episode 25, 26 A Canterlot Wedding.
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So far so good
More plz D: :D
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I'm currently working on chapter 4! So please be patient :D
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YAY :D cant wait
This reason seems abit off.
Twilight doesn't strikes me as someone who would risk blowing everything up.
Your choice, though.
At that point in time, Rhonin was the leader of the Kirin'Tor,
What?
Some kind of break in between would be nice. Like a line of "~~~~ " or something.
A reasons why Celestia did this, at somepoint, would be nice.
The counterspell is fine, in my book
This should force a aggressive reaction from the guards or Celestia.
A bit more than "tense" would be nice, as an explanation for recent events.
Some part of what happens in the next chapter could fit there.
The singing part doesn't really fit where it is right now.
Kinda happend last chapter.
It is odd that she says something like that and they go on as if nothing happend.
They were about to kill each other last chapter. Restructuring last chapter would make this more believable.
Why would Luna allow that, Sophia is just a stranger to her, at this point. Restructuring last chapter would make this more believable.
They could, but the well was way more potent as a source.
After the explosion the magiacal energy got distributet over the entire planet, making it easier to pull energy from the surrounding area.
I dont really get why she would walk when she could use a portal.
Meh, your choice.
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Just little joke, since gnomes are rather small and some horses tower over them.
About the second part, I don't really understand what you mean.
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I am not really up to date when it comes to the correct lore of Warcraft, but I use the information I know. And keep in mind it takes place in an alternate universe. Thanks for the review though :P
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I know the singing part was off, but I was out of ideas and Sophia was a bit zoned out.
As for why celestia did't act towards the action. I have honestly no idea, I believe I forgot to put it in. my bad.
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-Yea I noticed when I posted the chapter.
-Sophia knows what Celestia can do with little afford, but she is the forgiving type.
-She tries to be friendly towards Luna, and we know patting a horse on the muzzle is something they like.
All in all, thank you for the lovely reviews my friend. I hope to see some more reviews in the future.
Poor Blueblood, he won't be missed at all.
AWWW, if you turn blueballs into a gelding I wont be able to call the waist of space blueballs anymore
Blueblood, Rule number 2 in Warcraft is don't antagonize a mage. Rule 1 is don't anger your healer.
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That is indeed the number 1 rule. yet, Don't let the huntard pull, is also an important one.
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That is rule 3
I'm curious about the concept, but I just can't get over the grammar. Please get yourself an editor or proof-reader.
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No one is flawless, and I've asked many people if they want to proof-read or be an editor but most decline
Filth never realize just how close to death they always are
They ALWAYS prance around thinking themselves tough shit, there is a reason most of the people in my graduating class went military or cop
Aww I wanted Blueblood to explode
Why? Why did he survive? can't you just put him on/in ice?
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As much as I wanted to just kill him off, it would be to OP and the fact Celestia heard the entire fight. So killing him off might end with Sophia being banished.
5991832 She is a mage, she didn't need to kill him to put him on ice ;P ( is this the right way to say this in englisch?)
Also, was this a warlock spell she used last? sorry a bid out of touch with WOW XD.
5992042 Well considering she pretty much fired a giant beam of arcane strong enough to knock alexstrasia on her ass I wouldn't say it was a lock spell, I think she just overpowered an arcane blast then focused it into a single direction rather than a pushing area of affect, which would explain how Celestia was panting and sweating a bit after the attack since pure arcane magic just got fired at blueba- I mean blueblood after effectively pissing her off
6188952 well as lone she doesn't start to swing a oversize ax around and screams like a mad Gnome everything is ok ^^.
6190066 True but in all honesty, if she's a true fire mage that's also skilled in arcane i'm gonna worry cause that means she has enough fire power to take on the royal sisters and have a good chance of coming out on top since in Wrath of the lich King expansion Fire spec mages melts health bars like they were water and arcane mages were basically walking turrets like the hunters, still can't wait for the next episode and i'm suprised twilight hasn't freaked yet and tried to study her magics/ record every last detail.
6190504 that's true, where is freaklight sparkle XD?
This would be so funny to see twilight go full research mode on her.
6190518 I'm sure its coming soon though it'll be hilarious when it happens cause our Sophia will then get to chose how to deal with her, which is always a plus! :)
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I'm still working on it but since my health isn't at it's best it might take a while. BUT it will come! I promise you!!
6192888 hehe, no worrries mate, all good things will come with time.
Go wipe the floor with him. He doesn't know what to expect so it shouldn't be that hard. Although his defences will probably be hard to get around. But Celestia did have a hard time when she fired her rage beam.
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So that's 1 for Sophia and 0 for shining.
Oh, I'm gonna enjoy writing this fighting scene
great yeah just use names and cities and all that bullshit that nobody knows
you do realise that this type of scheme is outdated right? that this slot is meant for CONTEXT, not CONFUSING THE READER.