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Nightmare Moon banished Celestia to the sun a thousand years ago, Equestria is different and so is everyone we know. how will it be different? What will the Equestrian Empire be like? What happens when Celestia returns?

Read to find out.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 20 )

I think this is a great story. I've read plenty of stories in which Nightmare Moon and Celestia's places are switched but this is the first one that actually does more than just switch them around. Celestia failing to see the reality before her, Luna/Nightmare Moon stepping in before it's too late... very well done, really.

Only thing I find a bit odd is that Nightmare so casually calls a hit on Twilight's family. Seems weird, when a thousand years ago, she kicked her sister into the sun in order to save her ponies.

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To address Nightmare Moon being so casual about killing Twilight's family,
from what little we've seen of her, her mood is inconsistent, she's more than likely a little insane.
In her episode she went from trying to kill the mane six with a manticore and making the ground drop away underneath them- so they'd fall to their deaths, to cutting off Steven Magnet's moustache and then trying to just frighten them away with scary faces on trees, before ponynapping Twilight to do Celestia knows what.

So from banishing her sister to the sun, to assassinating Twilight's parents is actually pretty close to Nightmare Moon's unstable personality.

It wil be interesting to see how the fight between Celestia and Twilight goes. cant wait for the next one. good job.:twilightsmile:

thats a dark ending for celestia. Loved it

"but I soon grew beyonb that,

Should be a "d" there.

Good chapter. Nightmare Moon is so delightfully evil :scootangel:

Firstly: Love the new Equus.
Secondly: I hope to see more of cold-hearted cruel anti-hero Twilight in the future.
This story gets a :yay:/10

This has an interesting premise so far and I can say that I've enjoyed the whole story this far. I'm really enjoying your spin on the characters and something about Pinkie being an explosives expert is just amazing.:pinkiecrazy: I hope you don't give up on this too soon and I wish you the best of luck.:moustache:

It seems that this story will be forgotten for a long time?

I really like this pinky pie

But she refused to listen to her logic, and said that by simply offering land and valuables there would be peace.

Yes, because as their interactions with Sombra, Discord, and Tirek show Celestia is an absolute pacifist who would never stand against a foe. I know it's alternate universe and all that crap but ugh that can only justify so much and I get the feeling this is just the tippity tip of the iceberg.

Using the power of the Elements she refused to allow the sun to rise and to defeat her elder sister, banishing her permanently to the sun.

Why? Seriously, what gives? It's not like Celestia was a hostile. At least I can rest easy knowing that Nightmare Moon/Luna won't be deified and Celestia demonized.

"I wish for that filly to have no distractions, I sense great potential within her but it will be stifled unless she is learning from me all day, everyday. Am I making myself clear?

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"It is a sad thing for a filly to lose her parents"

Oh fuuuuuuuuuuuck you.

history has a way of repeating itself, and as such gives old enemies a chance where they failed before.

Celestia might try to spread love and understanding, that horrible monster.

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How long will Celestia give away our pride?

Gee I dunno, how long until Equestria becomes a nation of hyper militant assholes?

And that is why I have reasoned, and fear, that your elder sister Celestia will be able to break free of the spell on the day of the celebration

Well gee golly gosh there Twilight, a non violent entity unfairly sealed away for a thousand years for not being a dangerous monster getting out? That's the worst possible thing that could ever happen.

and I know you've imprisoned her.

You're a special kind of retarded aren't you Twilight? Your whole hangup with Celestia is that she doesn't eat the babies of Equestrias enemies, the hell makes you think she'd fight Nightmare Goon?

I have to find the Elements and I have to use them to stop Celestia, you can all go back to protecting the town, or whatever it is you do

:pinkiehappy: "Okay, let's hear your best joke."
:twilightoops: "My best what?"
:pinkiehappy: "Your best joke, Ms. Can use the Element of Laughter"

Rarirty

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So basically, evil won, plain and simple.

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With the Twilight statement. They were put in fear for so long their not used to the concept of love.

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The whole situation's still frustrating, and the majority of my frustration was aimed at Nightmare Moon.

Nmm killed twilights parents. It was obvious. We all thought it cmon

"Peace" gets dragged into a war every other year with any nation that doesn't want to be subjugated by nmm lmao.

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