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FaelaArts


You are the most talented, most interesting, and most extraordinary person in the universe. And you are capable of amazing things. Because you are the reader. And you bring our worlds to life.

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Sometimes you have to risk it all.
Sometimes, it fails and you lose everything.

I thought I understood that better than most.

Everyday I put my life on the line with stunts beyond compare. Pushing myself to my limits, riding that fine line between too far and not enough. I had fans, I had a sister, I had friends. I still have those things, except there is a big difference.

“You will never fly again.”

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Comments ( 26 )

Absolutely amazing.

That was sweet. Very, very sweet.

Beautifully done!

Beautiful story!!
Much more than I thought it would be.
And delightfully longer than most other stories similar to this one - not that shorter stories are any less, but it is nice to read a bigger, longer story.
:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

8 likes, 4 comments... and Featured. FIMfic, I don't get you. At all.

That was cute c:

However, I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes. Some of the sentences were a little awkward as well. I suggest that you get an editor, and/or a pre-reader.

Ehhh...
Uhh...
Ah...
I-I don't get it...

It's just.... Ugh.... I... I-I don't know...
UGH...

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You're not meant to get, you're meant to read.

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Hrm, ok I'll contact my proofreader.

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What's wrong?

3161428 Ehh...
Ugh.
I-I...
Ughh....
I do-...
GAHH
*smashes face into wall*

There were quite a few times where you referred to scootaloo as he or his instead of she or her

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:raritycry: Damnit I did it again. First it was :rainbowkiss: and now :scootangel:

That ending:ajbemused: I'm soz but that ending was bad good story bad ending

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I can't please everyone :applejackunsure:

Absolutely loved this fic

Beautiful. Glorious, even.

What happened to Rainbow Dash (accident wise), basically happened to me, except I don't have wings :derpytongue2: I was playing a game of basketball and this girl from the other team's elbow slammed into the side of my head. Luckily, i just got knocked out and had a bit of pain here and there, but I have to be more careful than the others when I'm playing.

This was awesomely awesome!!!! I really loved it! :rainbowkiss:

I'd love if this got a sequel about RD being able to fly again... but I'll be fine if it doesn't happen, since the ending was still very nice.

6460895 Unlikely to happen, sorry.

6461226 Eh, it's fine.
Like I said, the ending was happy enough.
Plus, I didn't think one would come. I just thought it wouldn't hurt to ask

I really liked this story. Thanks

I found it!!! I've been trying to find a story where Rainbow Dash loses her wings that didn't go off with some crazy scheme or or Rainbow Dash losing her mind this was a really good story I would definitely like to see a sequel:pinkiehappy:

Great story from start to finish.

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