In The Dark

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1coolguy

1coolguy #1 · Aug 31st, 2013 · · ·

well,,, that was Dark and creepy as all hell
Well done, 10/10

Gypsy Writefag

Gypsy Writefag #2 · Aug 31st, 2013 · · ·

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Since people aren't leaving comments, I can only assume it's them not liking the subject matter, as is the case with many things.

Tszeb

Tszeb #3 · Aug 31st, 2013 · · ·

It is... deeper and darker than an average clopfic... and I like it
The way she relives what she has done is really creepy and it's working very good in my opinion.

Ngage953

Ngage953 #4 · Aug 31st, 2013 · 2 · ·

The story was not that bad, and I loved the altered letter from Silent Hill 2 in the beginning.

roboman792

roboman792 #5 · Sep 1st, 2013 · · ·

Sweet!

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #6 · Sep 2nd, 2013 · · ·

It's an interesting idea, but lacking story-wise. The dark and disturbing events a la Silent Hill do not pay off. It ends up being a build-up to an anti-climatic (plot wise) ending. In point, the active ending seems primarily tacked on. While the appearance of Button to molest his mother and a familiarity that a monster that is based on Pyramid head is a representation of repressed issues do combine to indicate something sexual, it does not fit the theme. It seems more like a nightmare that suddenly turned into a wet dream.

Gypsy Writefag

Gypsy Writefag #7 · Sep 2nd, 2013 · 2 · ·

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My intention with the ending was to show Button's mother ultimately coming to terms with the fact, that she's been using her own son sexually.

Honestly, I wish I had worked far more on the story, because the premise had far more potential, and the whole thing could have been much better.

The Boorywooch