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Roran Dreamon
I have no idea what I am doing, I write, I read and I play games, what more can a guy want while he waits for college to start again?
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Its back!!!!!
It lives...? IT LIVES!!!
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Technically a Pegasus at a far enough distance is an UFO
Worth the wait?
We will see
Oooo this gun be good
Wonder how the romance is gonna work
im waiting for spike to say PAY UP
Nice to see the remake of this story.
AKVasto Prime, Palatine Rhino Prime, Boltor Prime and please tell me you have Nikana Prime. Best one-handed sword in the game!
I personally like to think that the warframe moved on its own to break War and save the Operator. I mean it is made out of Technocyte Infested flesh, so it may have some low level intelligence.
Also, I'm pretty sure that Sombra also specializes in curses, so Twilight is double wrong.
Enjoy your Dex Sybaris responsibly Tenno. Please don't shoot any ponies with it.
7055997 I already abused the hell out of my Dex Sybaris with 5 Forma's. Now I can sell my old one!
Woot! It LIVES!
Now to start on my warframe story with frost as the main character. Cause frost is best frame and you can deny that it isn't.Valkire is a better tank than Frost and Rhino :(
Psn is DJ_Arashi_Rora if anyone wants to squad up for warframe
lv 30 Frost, lv 30 Nova Prime, lv 30 Valkire, lv 30 Sayrin, and lv 27 Ember
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When you finally get the update, the new frame is also more tanky then Frost.
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Nooooooooo!
My beloved Frost....
Sssshhhhhhhhhhhh you can't say anything is more tanky than Frost, you'll ruin my favorite frame.
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The frame is a freaking monster of a tank and'll make you want your mummy.
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*as Frost in my Snow Globe*
"Welcome to my parlor said the spider to the fly."
I welcome you to fight me in my Snow Globe, I'll repaint it with your blood..... Wait warframes are empty.....
Eh, my Anku will buried into any challenger's chest!
Which Warframe do you guys think is gonna be next to get the Prime makeover?
I... I....
I don't know how to react to this. I thoroughly enjoyed the story arc as it was, at least to a degree. While your story experience has gotten better grammar-wise and you are showing more than telling... it's like the main character went from an alright character that was a little mary sue-ish but had at least some backup to it to some completely different character that is the equivalent of a young teenager personality wise, shown through both his dialogue and actions. I honestly can't say i'll like where it goes, but at least you are giving it a go, so i'll keep following with hope.
space ball refrence
darkhelmet
"keep firing 'squee'holes"
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The Mary Sue part can't apply quite yet since the character backstory is basically the background that you find out while playing Warframe.
Lol, now we have AkStiletto Prime.
when will the next chapter be out?
Nice to see another chapter of this story. Glad to see Twilight start first contact. I wonder if Pinkie would have a relationship with the Tenho like in the original version or if Twilight would try her luck with him.
That's life and no worries on the chapter length, from what I've seen 3-4 thousand words is considered the average.
I feel really bad when I saw how far apart the chapters were... All those updates that changed Warframe, all when you're trying to write a chapter. Good work with it. And after acquiring Frost Prime, I still want to make a Warframe story.
Perhaps a cross over?
Fun chapter as always. I'm kinda curious as to what level of anthro you have your ponies at.
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7438404 they still have horns and he said they look humanoidesque so I would think level 4 on the scale.
As long as this story gets updated im fine
You still when with 'I can't understand what your saying' bit?
7438853 Yes because when you encounter an alien race you obviously know their language by heart.
7438404 7438503 It is pretty much between 4 and 3
7438938 thanks dood
7438938 Now that I think about it, I think you said that at one point in the previous version, but I could be wrong.
I'm liking this so far, tracking to see where this goes
this is interesting, looking forward to the next chapter
Yay a new chapter
Okay, this chapter is awesome. It's nice to see that Victor has a good first encounter so far and his interaction with the Princesses was friendly so far. Still, I wonder how he'd interact with AJ as she was interested in touching his muscles for some reason and she was blushing when he picked her up. Anyway, I liked this chapter and I hope the next one comes soon.
*Looks at the Glaxion*
Well, yes. Also I wonder if the Nukor or Gammacor counts as more of a death ray.
I hope they do fix that language barrier in the next chapter.
7456193 That would be the Opticor.
The Glaxion was the first weapon on my mind as well, but you beat me to it.
Wonder when are they gonna remove the language barrier?
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Nah, the opticor is the handheld space cannon of destruction, not a death ray. Death rays are usually more pistol like and vaporize things.
7456468 Death Ray can mean a lot of things. It can be a Cannon, it can be a mounted weapon, or it can be a Pistol. Point is, Death Ray is a VERY Loose term for alien weapons, since it's what's fired from the weapon.
Dunno where you got the idea that Death Rays are limited to Pistols, but they're not. If a Death Ray is slapped onto a Pistol, it's called a Blaster.
Sides, the Gammacore is too weak to be a Blaster of any kind, the Nukor is more fitting. Wonder how Spike and Dashie would react to Tenno Tech Weapons? Dashie would likely gain a liking for the Nikana Blade, as it's a light and very deadly weapon.
Spike would likely be rather disappointed up until Victor Rhino pulls out a Corpus weapon, since those fit Spike's ideas of Sci-Fi Weapons.
Another awesome chapter cant wait for the next one
next chapter please
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Good chapter, aside from a few typos and grammar errors. Such as missing commas that could help with the pacing, and run-on sentences that could be broken down into multiple, smaller ones.
Understandable, but it is a little awkward and quotations would be more appropriate.
For example:
"As strong", and the "it is" isn't necessary.
It is unknown what the Orokin's specific educational standards were, but it is very odd that a ship-full of adolescent children of a highly advanced civilization would consider basic reading or writing ability to be a rarity. This is emphasized by the fact that, as you stated, they were later trained by the Orokin to be living weapons after the void incident; wouldn't teaching them to read and write to better receive and understand orders or compile reports be a quintessential cornerstone of military training and competence? Even if the Tenno couldn't read or write very well before the incident or after their abuse, it is an imperative part of communication and, by extension, an effective organization. The Lotus should be encouraging those who do not have the knowledge to seek it out.
It is simply odd.
Again, good chapter. Some of the grammar and sentence structure could use some revising, but nothing major.
Yea good luck with that shining.
I like it
Oh good job Luna
That was a fun read, still working on my story. Thanks for being an inspiration for me to stop being lazy.
I'd pop a Roar and a Stomp